[Report This]Date: February 11 2022 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day
Fantastic start you have here. I've only read the first chapter so far, I'll get to the others later. But I want to tell you that you have something awesome in your hands. Instantly I was connected to these characters and I can't wait to read more when I have the time. I like all of the world-building choices you made here. I hope the durability aspect gets explored more. So many things were excellent in the first chapter alone. My favorite part was him being in the sock. I love that Kacey still checked with him first and got his consent(which is always crucial, especially in a size-relationship like this). I also hope that there are tiny electronics developed to be used.
I can't wait to see the relationship between these two blossom. The "Be my girlfriend." was perfect.