Date: September 06 2023 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
Poor Saffy, she will now believe she digested you to fast to save. Too bad it wasn't full tour, but it was still great with the internals.
Author's Response:
I know! D: Ugh I set up a spinoff for her in the chapter where the MC gets a "ghost", multiple timelines and all that - I'm sure we'll see her again some day!
Date: June 05 2023 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1 - 1300s
Not much to say, other than fantastic story! Giants of yesteryear are very underutilized. I think it'd be interesting if you went back even earlier than the 1300s!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! And I agree! I'm actually going to be opening a poll up on my Discord or Patreon to determine the next time period - so keep an eye out!
[Report This]Date: February 01 2023 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 1 - 1300s
Excellent story! I’m loving the concept so far and I’m really curious to see what time period our protagonist ends up in next!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad! I'm actually going to be hosting a poll on my Discord or Patreon for the next time period, if you'd like to vote!
[Report This]Date: September 02 2022 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 9
Hmmm! I wonder if a chrono-spatial counterpart is headed back to the Middle English girl?
Author's Response:
Ohh! I suppose only Time will tell! ;P
Date: September 01 2022 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 9
Nice. I really hope we get to see the inside of her stomach before changing era's. Especially if while in the stomach you get covered in food. Even more if it is full tour and you change era's right before leaving out the back end.
Author's Response:
We just might get to see the inside!
[Report This]Date: August 31 2022 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 9
Glad to see you've gotten to the potential vore segment! Any chance of some butt fun in later chapters?
Author's Response:
Unlikely, since it's not what I'd write for myself! But I do take commissions!
[Report This]Date: July 09 2022 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 8
I bet I know what Smalls is thinking at this point.
"Please, Saffy. I don't want anymore!"
Date: April 17 2022 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 8
Enjoying your story so far. Just wanted to ask: you wouldn't be opposed to some butt action during all this time-travel, would you? Like anal vore or just straight up insertion and being used for sex?
Author's Response:
Hmm, it's not the direction I planned on going, but I do take commissions !
[Report This]Date: April 10 2022 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
Not a bad story, thus far! I read all seven chapters, straight through. :-)
I have to be honest, though. It was a bit of a struggle getting through the ancient dialect simulations. But, on the upside? It makes Saffy's Cockney accent easier to interpret, by comparison!
Looking forward to chapter 8. :-)
Author's Response: I'm super glad you liked it! Part of the reason I decided to go for the middle English was because it would be a struggle to understand it, if you were plucked out of time!
[Report This]Date: April 04 2022 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 1 - 1300s
A Saffy spinoff would make my day!
Author's Response:
Saffy is super popular! I actually think I might give her her own story spinoff, haha. I'm still waiting on the Patreon numbers to justify an extra 10k word story a month, but that might be hers~!
[Report This]Date: April 04 2022 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 7
Ok, I am late to reviewing but dropping one now XD
I love the concept of time travel in size stories, it always opens so many doors to fun content and interaction especially between past and modern day characters and cultural/societal differences. (and misunderstandings)
Your writing in these chapters is very well done, I love the use of language and time specific accents/vocabulary.
Your interaction so far in the chapters has been very evocative, really making the scenes pop out and visualized well when reading.
The in-shoe and foot content have been very sexy and hot to read as well as the tiny traveler's experience with these giantess (to him).
I have to agree with vegetaboy and Jsmith20. Sapphire is my favorite character so far (and the story isn't even far along XD).
Her characters attitude, personality and interaction with the tiny character are very cool, and feel exciting to see how they progress.
I have to also second Jsmtih20's idea. I would love a spin-off centrered around the time traveler sticking with Sapphire (maybe a gltich or broken component to his suit and tech. Maybe the chance of growing back to normal, or slightly bigger, but being stuck in that time, etc) I just would love to read a saphire spin off XD
Keep up the great work, these chapters have been a real gem to read.
Author's Response:
I'm super glad you're enjoying it! It's reviews like this that really keep me going on the difficult days :')
Saffy has been so popular! I'll probably make it a Patreon goal to give her her own spin off, and I actually already have some ideas! ^^
[Report This]Date: April 04 2022 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 1 - 1300s
I know that you intend to keep him traveling through history, but I would love a version of this story where he just stays with Saffy. She's such a cool character and the dyanmic between the two is so interesting. I hope that you might consider an alternate version where he is with her and only her because the world-building for her era is so cool and I think that the two would have awesome adventures together.
I love the premise overall, but I think Saffy is written really well and just jumps out of the story and would be amazing to keep reading about.
[Report This]Date: April 04 2022 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
OK so i am loving these Victorian London chapters so far.
Sapphire is great!! I love her attitude and personality and it really shows you had a blast writing these two chapters.
(I kind of want the time traveler to stay here forever XD)
Your description of the inside of Sapphire's shoe and under her foot/sock again were really well done, really puts me into the scene and I loved it.
Again you're doing a great job on the accents/speach patterns of the time.
I can't wait to see what happens with Sapphire next :D
[Report This]Date: March 29 2022 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 1 - 1300s
Hi, I'm actually Zelta228 but it's been so long I can't even remember what email I used.
Made an account to say that your story really stands out. I especially enjoyed the writing style of the Victorian Era chapter. With art, you know it when you see it. Best of luck!
Author's Response:
Hey! Sorry for the delay.
It really means so much to me to get reviews like this!! I'm thrilled you like it, and I had a ton of fun with the Victorian Era, too! I hope I can continue to put out some great stuff for you to enjoy ^^
Date: March 07 2022 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 3
I like the story so far. Kind of disappointed that Victorian England won, but oh well.
Personally I hope to see ancient rome, greece or egypt next. Maybe persia.
Author's Response:
Well, the best part about it is we can explore another time period next! :) keep your eyes peeled for more polls!
I also have been considering doing spin-offs that focus on multiple characters in specific time periods, if there is enough interest!
Date: March 06 2022 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
I always felt a time travel sizey story could have so much potential like you could do giant cave women or even go to Egypt and have a giant pharaoh. I can't wait to see where you go with this.
Date: February 21 2022 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 1 - 1300s
Very interesting and unique concept. I love that you thought about the language as well.
Would love to see all kinds of regions and timeperiods.
Like, a big hairy cavewoman in the ice age alps, don't think anyone did that before.
A native American girl before Columbus.
Ancient egypt.
So many possibilities. Really cool idea by you!
Author's Response:
Your feedback means so much - and the best part of the idea, IMO - is that you can explore ALL kinds of possibilities!
I'm actually launching a Patreon for polls (and maybe commissions,) if you're interested! (There's an early bird special for half off, too! ;))
If you ever want to check it out, the link is in my bio! <3
Date: February 21 2022 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 1 - 1300s
I really like the first chapter.
Hope to see what happens with Lyra in the next chapter.
you had a great way of describing the situation and atmosphere her boots create as well as what the tiny traveler was experiencing.
I think a poll would be great :)
(I personally would love to see Egypt, Africa, Greek, Italian, and maybe a Victorian London setting) if he winds up bouncing around to different time frames in those countries/regions.
Author's Response:
I'm really glad you liked it! Victorian London is actually a pet favorite of mine too, great taste!
I'm actually launching a Patreon for polls (and maybe commissions,) if you're interested- there's an early bird special for half off, too! ;)
https://www.patreon.com/dongus
[Report This]Date: February 21 2022 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 1 - 1300s
Nice story, the way you describe the scenes is great also the story is very adaptable and interesting.
The poll idea is good but are these gonna be 1 chapter stories?
Author's Response:
I haven't decided yet! I might do several chapters an era, or single-chapter stories with longer chapters. What would you like best?
[Report This]Date: February 21 2022 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 1 - 1300s
Very interesting concept and story so far. Love the descriptions of Lyra's sweaty and overly worn, stench filled boots.
Being 3 inches tall, wouldn't Lyra stop to take out what is obviously rather big {to her perspective} from her boot?
Will Lyra find the 3 inch tall / small man in her boot? If she does, what will Lyra do with him, or will he transport first?
Could Lyra's intense foot odor add energy to his time travel? Perhaps instead of strictly electricity enabling him to time travel, perhaps extreme foot odor could provide an alternative, short term fuel source.
All great possibilities to a really good story.
Author's Response:
I'm really glad you liked it! I'm hoping to do a chapter a week, and explore different time periods as the main character gets smaller. I actually might start a Patreon for polls to pick the next era, if there's enough interest.