[Report This]Date: January 02 2023 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 11
Zoe is confusing. She seems nice. I don’t think it’s suspicious at all that there’s men’s clothes there. She works at a bar so it’s probably common for her to have a guy over or something.
What is weird to me is how Zoe keeps being overprotective by being touchy. It’s like she thinks the only way to protect him is by holding him or something. Lol.
I gotta admit. I like the introduction to Lisa. She seems playful and confident. Even the sex joke was good and suited her character. Also, the fact that she wasn’t shocked of him being squashed by a butt and thighs actually makes me wonder if she’s familiar with such activities.
Well, I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Yeah, Zoey´s... complicated. And Lisa´s her friend, however, they´re not the same. But I just posted the new chapter where you can get to understand things a little better :D
[Report This]Date: December 31 2022 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
Chapter 11 is the best yet. We finally get to see more of Zoey. Seems like Matt should just settle down with her. But, she has secrets/issues. What are they? What's with her tiny clothing collection? I'm hooked. I need to know. And while we're at it, what's with Lisa? Is Matt finally going to get a break? Ha! Probably not!
Author's Response:
Glad you like it! Yeah, it was time to talk a little more of Zoey... but not too much ;D
And, about Lisa, well, there´s a new chapter here, hope you like that one too
[Report This]Date: December 31 2022 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 11
Keep it up.
Author's Response:
Thank you!