Reviewer: LewdSensei Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2022 2:32 AM Title: Chapter I: Nostalgia and Hope

Loving the story I always adore the ones where the plot and the fetish are equally balanced also scenes where you describe the fetish acts are top tier only problem I would have is the pacing how John forgit his mother in 4 days pretty hard to believe second I would sacrifice my life for to be IYO’s dinner

Author's Response:

You're right. I guess I was in a hurry and I missed that detail. Rookie mistakes. The general idea was that the dream was the manifestation of Jon's anger at what her mother had supposedly done and in his fury the boy wanted to forget her. But it is very little time... you are right.

And second Yeah me too