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Reviewer: liliannnwritesstuff Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2022 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

> Violet becomes evil

> Immediately wants to help the jews


what did Glaazius mean by this?



Author's Response:

Ha! I knew I should have written a warning when posting a chapter that revolves around a sensitive matter.

Let me say this right away. This chapter is by no means some hidden statement I’m trying to make. Its purely meant for fun. I hate war and I hate choosing sides even more. I rather see us living in a conflict-free world.

But why specifically the Jews? I hear you thinking. Simple, because I wanted to write something in a realistic setting. And the conflict between the Jews and the Palestines were the first one that popped up in my head. Letting Violet choosing sides with the Jews is pure coincidence. I might as well have written about the conflict between the Hutsie’s and the tutsi’s, or the imperialistic China and the people of Taiwan and Tibet for all that matter.

In this chapter, Violet is not yet at the zenith of her evilness. She gradually floats from a being a beloved superheroine who only lives to keep people safe to a point (where she is now) that she finds she has the right to mingle in worldly affairs and have an opinion about it.

So again. This chapter is not meant to push some political statement in my reader’s face! Its just meant for fun.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 09 2022 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Will Violet calm down her anger if some fan of her comes straight to her and offers to tickle her foot?



Author's Response:

I wouldn't bet my money on it

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2022 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

To be asked by a cute girl to tickle her soft, pretty foot? I would answer any time of the day.



Author's Response:

And Violet is a very cute girl with very soft feet ;)

Reviewer: Zaiker Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2022 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

I’m loving the story so far. It combines my two favorite kinks: superwomen and size shifting.

I love how Violet seems to enjoy her incredible power and hope to see more of her smug side. I would love to see her bragging about  how much better her life is.



Author's Response:

Those are my kinks too!

Glad you liked it! We will definitely see more of Violet's snarky attitude in the upcoming chapters.

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2022 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very, Very Great Story!  Can't wait to read more of this.

Obviously something happened with that stone with a green hue Flemsy threw to Violet; perhaps the transformation you mentioned in your story description.

Would definitely like to hear more about the "appealing young cadet", "blonde girl", "who stuffed him {Flemsy} in the back pocket of her tight ass".  She sounds like one sexy as hell female cop.

Seems Chief Callaway is a corrupt cop, or am I reading too much into his reaction of Flemsy taking a shot at him?

Can't wait to read more.  Exceptionally well done.



Author's Response:

Hey thx for the kind words! There will definitely be more.
And yes, the stone is the thing that will trigger certain changes in Violet.
Haha, the appealing young cadet is only a bit player in this story I'm afraid.
Chief Callaway is not corrupt. It was implied that he was about to get inside there to negotiate with Flemsy right before Violet's arrival. Perhaps Flemsy got nervous when he saw Violet entering the scene. Or perhaps he's just a disloyal dog who cannot be trusted on his word. That's for the reader to decide, I guess.

But I like it when readers start analyzing my stories.
Thx for reading my story and leaving a review ;)

Reviewer: BenX21 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21 2022 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

so it will be a slow transformation from good to evil? really like stories like this
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Author's Response:

thx for liking it!
And yes, Violet will gradually become more evil over the course of the upcoming chapters

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