I think it was back in June of 2023 that I first discovered this story. I wasn't following it for the first year or so of the chapters, but once I did discover it I read it all and got myself up to speed. I'm not sure when Rasha got introduced into the story, or the part where she "discovered" the tinies, but I think it was somewhere around that time. So I just realized its probably been something like 2 years now where I've been in suspense wondering how the complete revelation about the tinies from Kristen would go. Well, maybe it was somewhat less than 2 years. Maybe a year and a half? Not sure, but anyway this has been a long time coming. lol

The way that it finally happened isn't how I was expecting though. To be honest, I never knew what to expect, but I certainly did not expect it to be this devious sort of trickery on Kristen's part. I'm also amazed that Kristen would trust her in the room alone like that after what happened before. I mean, she probably wouldn't go all out and completely just destroy every city, but there's no way Kristen could know that for certain, right? But there was a good chance that some amount of city destruction would have happened. Maybe Kristen doesn't care, but she should because then her fun would end all that much quicker.

In any case, what's done is done. It was a good means to wrangle up all the dissenters in the cities and "cleanse" them, so that only true loyalists remain. Everyone who willfully got into the boxes is undeniably "guilty" of the "crime" of wanting to escape from Kristen. If Kristen's goal is to reduce the tinies down to just "yes men" who never oppose her in any way, then she is certainly making great progress towards achieving that. But that might make things less fun, and in the future her "prisoner nights" will have to include increasingly less "guilty" people simply because the supply of "guilty" is getting depleted fast.

It will be interesting to see how Rasha handles the micros in her own box. I can only hope that she will be more sensible in her handling of them than Kristen. Every giant woman in the story so far has turned out to violent, either from the start, or eventually working their way in that direction and ending up that way (Kristen). Rasha would be the exception if she treats them in a kind and gentle manner, as opposed to how all the others have done. That's not to say that Kristen and Ginny aren't capable of being kind and gentle (sometimes), but they're not consistent about it and do become violent often. It would make things more interesting in my opinion if Rasha didn't just end up the same as everyone else. It is good to have violent giantesses in these stories, and I'm not trying to say otherwise, but that doesn't mean that literally every giant woman should end up the same giant monster in the end. Its good to have some variety, you know? When you've taken the step of intentionally (as opposed to on accident) crushing or devouring or otherwise ending a tiny person's life, then a line has been crossed and it is crossed permanently. Sure, they can try to make amends and be nice to other tinies in the future, but it doesn't change the fact that they've murdered someone and that fact never goes away. Kristen, Ginny, Janelle, and Leslie have all crossed that line. So far Rasha hasn't. She has killed lots of people, but so far only on accident. Will it stay that way, or will she just end up like all the others? That remains to be seen.

So Parker is descending into the exact same Kristen-obsession madness that consumed Anton? So far she hasn't murdered her "friend" Cameron, but it looks like she might come to that because he now knows "too much". Unfortunately, he managed to send that message off before Cameron arrested him, so now someone else also knows "too much".

That was quite the cliffhanger there at the end. I'm very interested in seeing how that will turn out. Parker now has quite a dilemma on her hands if she somehow wants to stop Justyna from directing Ostrov's scientists from researching a way to bring them all back to their own realities. Now that Justyna knows, there's no way that she would be convinced NOT to do that, so the only way Parker could stop her is by killing her and many many other people.

And so far Kristen herself doesn't even know about any of this. Maybe it would be in Parker's best interest to keep it that way, and then try to sort this matter out herself by going into the Ostrov room herself, alone, (somehow). Or finding some way to convince Kristen to allowing her in there, but without spilling the beans about why she needs to go there. Or maybe she would just tell her, but its unclear how Kristen would react to this.

But then again, maybe Parker could just conclude that Ostrov's business is its own and it doesn't have to include Crest. If Ostrov wants to go back then let them, it doesn't mean she has to too, right? But given her Anton-like descent into madness she may not accept whether or not others consent to living under Goddess Kristen's rule. If she genuinely believes Kristen is a Goddess, as Anton did, then she probably figures Kristen has the divine right to rule over all the people that she does. In fact if anything, she might think that Kristen should rule over EVEN MORE people. Let's not forget that this same means that brought them all into Kristen's house in the first place and which could potentially send them all back, ALSO has the same potential to bring EVEN MORE people into the rooms, right? I don't know if that's a direction you want to take the story, but its an idea, certainly. :)

There's just so MANY different paths to consider where that cliffhanger in the end might branch off into. A lot of it will depend on whether Kristen is informed of this matter or not. Parker is the only one who conceivably might inform her. Justyna certainly wouldn't. Or maybe Justyna would....? Let's consider that for a moment.

Justyna and Kristen are in a rocky relationship right now for very understandable reasons. Kristen has made it clear at various times in the past that she is unhappy about those rooms in her house being occupied by these tiny cities/entire country, because it means she can't fully use those rooms they way she should have been able to, but its been a burden that she has been willing to bear all these years (somewhat grudgingly at times). So from Justyna's perspective it would seem like Kristen would be happy if they could all return back to their original realities and she could be free of them, right? That was Kristen's original position and it would make sense if Justyna still believes that to hold true, even though Kristen has increasingly become mad with the power she has over all of them.

So Justyna might badly miscalculate the situation and tell Kristen that their closing in on a way to all go back to their home worlds. She might think Kristen would be happy to be rid of them, but in reality it would be the opposite, and she would forbid them to leave. So yeah it could go that way. That's how Kristen could find out, and then give Parker her blessings to shut down the Ostrov research program by any means necessary. Or otherwise it could be Parker that tells her, but a horrible miscalculation on Justyna's part could also be the reason she finds out. Or maybe she just doesn't find out at all and maybe Parker and Justyna work this matter out entirely by themselves somehow (maybe even amicably). So many many different ways it could go.

Thinking about this kinda reminds me of what was just going on recently with Iran's nuclear research facilities and how Trump bombed them with bunker-busters, though it is unclear if they were actually destroyed or how much. Ostrov's Graviton (or whatever) research program to send them back home might be something a lot like that. If Justyna is smart (and she is) she would probably have this happen deep under a mountain if possible. That would give it some protection in case a "micro" giant like Parker comes into the room and tries to shut it down. Against "micros" it would probably help, but even entire mountains couldn't stop Kristen if she got involved directly. The only security they might have against her is secrecy. Having the research in some unknown carefully hidden place would mean Kristen would never know where to destroy. Though she could just destroy literally everything....

One final thing... someone in another review mentioned Milya the Cosmonaut and you responded to that saying you were amazed how no one commented on her or forgot about her. I just want to say I did not forget about her. I just never wanted to ask anything about her because I was afraid there would be a spoiler. But yes, I have been aware of her for these past 2 years and very much interested in where and how her return will fit in with the story. Given recent developments I am starting to get some idea of where and how that might actually happen, but again I don't want anything to be spoiled.

I kinda expect Milya to eventually show up in Kristen's reality some way or another. But it wouldn't be very much fun if she showed up being the exact same size as all the rest of her countrymen. If she appeared being the same size as Kristen, then that would have some very interesting potential. If she shows up as a colossal giantess, then that would be even more so. :)

But again I don't want any spoilers, so I'll wait patiently until that time comes.... or maybe she doesn't reappear in this story at all, but instead she shows up in her own story or something?

In any case I just wanted you to know that she wasn't forgotten about (not by me at least). But I just try not to ask about things that I don't want to be spoiled. That's also why when I analyze different things about the story I try to look at all the potential ways that things MIGHT play out, but I certainly don't want you to explain it to me directly. I want to find out what actually happens when I read it in the story itself. Until then I'm kinda just brainstorming I guess. But a lot of the times when the time comes it ends up being something that I never considered which takes me by surprise anyway, as was the case with a lot of the developments in this chapter.

Anyway, please keep up the good work!

Wow. What a wild ride. I feel like Kristen sort of ascended to the next level after this display of trickery and cruelty. I really liked seeing Rasha's part play out. And as usual, we're left wondering where we're going to go next. Amazing job.

I was literally thinking about this story and then you delivered, and in a big way. I can't wait to see what Rasha has planned! Hoping for some great feet scenarios!

Damn, what can I say? I’m at a complete loss for words. This latest chapter is absolutely amazing 10 out of 10. So much is happening that I honestly think this might be the best chapter in the story so far.

I had a feeling Kristen was going to pull something underhanded, especially with Elliot planning to interrupt her fun with the prisoners. Poor guy now he has to carry the weight of hundreds, maybe even thousands of deaths on his conscience, all because he tried to save a few innocent people.

Kristen planting the seeds of hatred against Elliot in the cities making it look like he was in on her plan was just brutal. And now it really seems like there’s foreshadowing that Parker might turn into another Anton, especially after what she did to Cameron… her own best friend. I just hope Justyna has the scientists in a secure location, and that Parker doesn’t sell her out just to get in Kristen’s good graces.

All in all, I’m really rooting for the tinies to find a way out and return to their own world. Fingers crossed! Or here’s a thought maybe Justyna gets the chance to grow into a giantess and give Kristen a taste of her own medicine. That could make for an incredible dream sequence chapter but that’s just an idea.

It's been a while since I last visited the site and it's nice to see how this story has grown, and it's sad to know that you had medical problems, I hope you are very well and that your health improves, I have really enjoyed seeing the changes and twists in the plot that you have devised since Kristen finding (forcing) love with a man in her class. I want to know more about this relationship, how you will advance the plot in it, that Ginny has a small city on her desk, a couple of lines about the coexistence between them is always welcome, Janelle and her cult of people is pure gold there, I like the subplots that you have strived to build, there are many secrets yet to be addressed, Anton and his participation in the shrinking and transportation to Kristen's world, I want to read that now, those lines about the couple in the micro room who are looking to hack Kirsten's internet network, the subtlety with which you have proposed it, I loved that it is going to happen, they are going to contact more giantesses, that events are developing that have made the culture of the  Cities like sporting events, great addition. I wish you could talk more about the culture and society of the micro and nano people, their customs, and I'm already dreaming about how Milya, the lost astronaut, will enter the story. Will she be an inhabitant of the room? Will she be affected by transportation? Will she be Kirsten's height or will she be mega? And for the world, will she be Kirsten's equivalent? I want to read this now. You have great world building, one of the best stories on the site.

I hope to see Maddy interacting with the 1/200000 tiny people in the future. And I have an idea: giantess could have the 1/200000 tiny army give her a foot massage.

This story does one of the best jobs I've seen about telling a long term story in a giantess scenario. From the beginning we've known that there is a sort of deadline for the tinies on when Kristen allows Maddie to see and interact with the tinies. Whenever that happens odds are not great that it will go well for the tinies and/or Kristen. Maddie might destroy everything not realizing the implications or, she might show more empathy than her mother and hate her mother. The odds of a positive outcome for all are very low.  The older Maddie gets in the story the more and more the tension seems to build for the tinies and for Kristen herself to continue keeping Maddie out of the room. 

Kristen's way of coping with the situation taught to her by Leslie was never to be ethical but to manage her life around being cruel and unfair to the tinies. She seems to have good in her but its always been easier to be selfish. The fact she's so paniced about pregnancy seems to imply she still has some compassion in her and might've been hoping the situation would work itself off when the population died off in her rooms and now has to cope with the fact that it wont end until she ends it herself or finds someone else to take over. 

Well done all around from a story/ plot perspective and with the smut aspects. 

Awesome chapter! Nicely done!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Given the fact that this story has reached the top 10 longest stories list on the site now I am curious as to how much left is there to go (if you have planned out the rest of the story up to its ending) :)

Things are starting to heat up! You’ve really stepped up the creativity in terms of the characters and micro cities, both of which have evolved so much since the story began. The all-men and all-women cities can be interesting places to explore over time and I like how Ostrov was both literally and ideologically split in two by Kristen’s destructive actions.

While Kristen has been exceptionally cruel towards her people at times, I like how you’ve teased introducing even more destructive giantesses into the story, like Nina and Valerie, not to mention what Ginny and Janelle have planned together.

The reveal with Justyna was a real gut punch. It was something I didn’t expect, but the perfect direction to take her story. I’m team Justyna all the way, though realistically, I don’t see how someone that small could ever hope to stand up against Kristen, even with the most advanced military weaponry. Can Ostrov, Justyna and her child truly be saved? 

Of all the characters, Cameron and Parker are definitely the most relatable. They seem like the closest thing to heroes in the story (disregarding Parker’s actions in Ostrov of course). However, given her obsession with Kristen and new rule over Crest, Parker may end up becoming the next Anton. I’m excited to see how Cameron and Parker’s relationship develops.

I’m usually not one to offer suggestions, but if there’s one interaction that I’d like to see from The Incident series that hasn’t been done before, it’s nanos being smuggled into the micro cities. I’m sure women like Nyla, Samantha or even Parker could make good use of them :)

Your commitment to writing despite facing health challenges is really inspiring. Wishing you luck on your recovery!