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Reviewer: carnage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2023 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 13 - The Power Visit Part 2

I can't tell you how much I'm enjoying this story. Keep it up man. Great work! I love Ginny obviously, but I'm really excited to read more about Leslie.

Author's Response:

Thank you carnage!  For anyone that doesn't know, carnage is a great writer and you should check out his stories as well. 

Reviewer: GhostWriter44 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2023 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 13 - The Power Visit Part 2

I can tell Leslie is gonna be my favorite character in here (which hopefully she’s in here more). I’m always a fan of overly cruel giantesses (Jessica was by far my favorite in the original Incident story). Really hoping to see non-unaware vore soon! And barefoot crush 



Author's Response:

There will be a few cruel characters here and there, Leslie might not be around all the time, but there are many plans for people who might even be worse than any other characters I have ever written.  Kristen will have her fair share of fun too.

Reviewer: sp180 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2023 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 13 - The Power Visit Part 2

I meant to say I would like to see more bare feet stuff from both Ginny and Kristen in regards to Ostrov's nanos, because they both appear to be less destructive and relatively gentle.

I find Leslie to be a very brutish character. That's not to say she's badly written. On the contrary, I, eventually, got to understand that in spite of her other questionable perspectives and behavior she was someone who could be relied on to get to the point of things and ultimately stopped Kristen from lying to herself about how she genuinely felt about her situation.

Great job!



Author's Response:

There's a ton of bare feet stuff coming up, now that I think Kristen understands her role a little bit more, I think she wont be as hesitant to walk around without shoes and the like. 

Leslie was a necessary character to progress Kristen, you said it exactly right.  I don't want another 14 chapters of Kristen trying to figure things out, Leslie was the tool to do so. 

Reviewer: sp180 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2023 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 13 - The Power Visit Part 2

I really hope to see more bare feet stuff with the Ostrov nanos and Ginny somehow

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