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Reviewer: sp180 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2024 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Adult Supervision

Great chapter! I hope the nanos can share with Ginny, or any of the women, they perspective through their phones. They can share their sights and senses on her toes!



Author's Response:

I've thought about what the nano perspective would look like from their phones and cameras. I do think I can incorporate something like that in the upcoming shift in the timeline of the story. 

Reviewer: Giantess Nation Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2024 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Adult Supervision

This was one of the best chapters so far, and also one of the longest too (which is a great combination lol). Were it not for the nudity and the gratuitous sexual content, the violence and destruction of the battle and the giant Ginny monster would have made for a great action flick or giant-monster horror flick (or whatever genre this could rightly be classified as). If only we could convince hollywood to produce such a film, then that would be a pretty awesome thing to see. If such a movie ever were to be made, then I'd nominate Jeannie Mai https://www.instagram.com/thejeanniemai to star in the roll as the Ginny monster (her real name is even kinda similar). Whenever I read this story, I always think of her whenever imagining what Ginny looks like.

That said, it was cool that you wrote how Ginny's appearance is completely alien to the people of Ostrov because Asians or people like Asians don't exist on their home world. I know you'd written similarly in one of the earlier chapters about some of the micros, when she ate them on the banana. The cool thing about her exotic appearance being completely alien to them is that it synergizes very well with the whole giant monster thing. :) Having your cities attacked, devoured, fucked, etc. by a giant woman that seems familiar to you is one thing, but Ginny being something they've never seen before takes it to a whole other level. It probably causes them to be more intimidated and terrified of her. This same thing could also be true in the case of Rasha also, in any hypothetical future interactions they have... though she already did interact with them by stepping on them (though you didn't write an account of this from their perspective, but I wonder what they made of her appearance and whether it was exotic to them like with Ginny, etc.)

Speaking of Rasha, you may have something already in mind and if so don't let me interrupt you with that, but if you need a suggestion on where to take things with her character, I was thinking that she has probably been thinking it all over and might be connecting the dots on what is going on. Obviously she saw Ostrov (and stepped on it), but in addition to that, she also stepped on those weird "bugs" before that. Either one of those on their own is weird in itself, but both these things plus Kristen's strict secrecy regarding those rooms are things that might be running through her head and maybe she'll either figure it out based off just that, or its something that will eat at her and she'll need to find out and either snoop some more or confront Kristen about it... or maybe Kristen will confront her about having snooped (and lying about it).

Plus I see you now have Janelle peering into the windows also, so it doesn't look like things are boding well for the tinies... more and more people are becoming more and more aware of things and that's more and more potential people to cause destruction, so that's not a good thing... for them, but maybe it is good for the readers. :)

In regards to criticism of this chapter, the only thing I really felt was off was Ginny's ability to see the Ostrovian military as "particles". My math could be off, but I remember trying to calculate how small they would be in relation to her (and Kristen) when she is 200 miles tall, and the best I could figure out is that they would be roughly on par with the size of Bacteria, and even a human's skin cells would dwarf them. So I think that's a good rule of thumb to consider when writing them, because a naked human eye can't see something like a bacteria, not as dots, and not even as particles like the chapter says. Of course this isn't including larger things they have like military vehicles, tanks, etc. Those are good deal larger than a human so maybe those things would be perceptible as "particles" to her. If that's what you mean then I retract my criticism there.

That said, under a microscope they absolutely would be observable to her. If she could get them onto a slide then I think she could see certainly see them. But not with the naked eye is all.

That being said, all those "particles" being stuck to her dildo and then going inside of her ass was very hot. :) Just like you wrote from the perspective of Rev and the city she devoured, I'm sure that many of those "particles" are still alive, albeit lost somewhere deep inside of her ass. Its just a shame you hadn't written it from their perspective, but perhaps in the next chapter or something? ;)

Anyway, if I understand things correctly, this was an excellent juxtaposition here. Ostrov being the most powerful, respected, and perhaps feared nation on its planet, and having this powerful and respected military being defeated by a this woman's dildo, getting stuck to it, and then being plunged deep inside of her rectum... where presumably many of them still remain and are trapped. Yes, that is a very powerful juxtaposition indeed. I hope that isn't overlooked in the next chapter. :)

The idea of the nanos surviving on (or inside) of Ginny's body was something I've been thinking of since several chapters back when she squished that city (and several others) with her stinky nylon-clad feet. While many surely ended up dead, the advantage they have in being as tiny as they are is that it gives them some ability to evade being squished and killed to some extent. So I think it is safe to say there were many survivors that just got caught up in the fibers of those nylons to face an unknown fate... probably lasting until drowning when she put those nylons in the washer... or something like that.

The account you gave from Rev's perspective was good, and potentially he could last a good while in there. They're so tiny that even brushing her teeth might not clear them out, but if Ginny rinses her mouth with mouthwash then that would wipe them out for sure. I will say it was kinda sad that Rev won't be able to accomplish his goal of getting to work in that city... :(

Anyway, now that much or most (all?) of the Rebel military forces have been defeated and imprisoned inside of Ginny's rectum, and the dildo which sent them there has been planted into the ground to tower over the landscape like a monolith, I reckon there will probably be some fanatics coming to worship that just as there were with Kristen's heels. There's undoubtedly many people still stuck to the juices on it so that would be a major rescue operation to try to save them... but if they're rebels then maybe Justyna would just prefer to leave them rot there. Besides, the priority of the rescue forces should be to save her, right? :)

Very interesting to see where things will develop from here. Part of me kinda hopes that not all of the rebels were defeated by Ginny's dildo, so that the fighting isn't entirely over yet, and that way there can be more shenanigans in the next chapter too... but that of course is up to you.

Oh! One final thought about the nukes. Like you had written, they might have a hard time to kill the giants with them, but if they have a LOT of them and concentrate them, then maybe its possible they could kill Kristen, Ginny, or whoever. But if only just one or a few hit then it would probably just cause a bad blister or burn on the skin or something. The worst thing would be to target the eyes, as that would be the most vulnerable part.

Anyway, I remember way way way back in one of the earliest chapters of the story when that female mayor (whose name I can't recall at the moment) threatened to kill Madelyn (when she was a baby) and that of course naturally pissed Kristen off. This chapter with the stuff about the nukes sorta reminds me about that. If that female mayor still holds a grudge after all these years then she might want to acquire those nukes somehow. Even though those nukes are nano scale, the cities I presume don't have any nukes at all, so it seems like something she'd want to get in order to get her revenge. But I completely understand if you don't want the nanos and micros to interact, but that was just something that came to mind.

Anyway, this was a great chapter! I look forward to seeing how things unfold in the next.



Author's Response:

Thank you GN, I'm glad you think this was one of the best chapters!  Yeah, Ginny's appearance is Alien to most of the country and cities, and I hope to explore more of that later when I get to more of the perspectives from her followers which I plan to flush out later.  Same thing could happen with Rasha, I haven't really gotten to that yet. 

We'll see where things go from here, I always appreciate your analysis and suggestions and they do help me plan on where to take things. 

Reviewer: Kamaeli Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2024 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Adult Supervision

You don't disappoint! Lots of good things happening here.. I'm curious to see where these events will lead 



Author's Response:

Thank you, Kam!  :)  Glad you liked it.  I think we're going to see things calm down just a bit and set up for what I'm going to consider the next phase of the story. 

Reviewer: carnage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2024 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Adult Supervision

Finally caught up on this story, and as usual, it's fantastic. This chapter was so good. The part in Ginny's mouth, amazing. The part where her cum is drowning and crushing the city, unbelievable. Keep it up man. Two great stories going on right now.



Author's Response:

Lol thanks for catching up, I know it's a lot.  I really appreciate the compliments from you!

Reviewer: GiantessLover21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2024 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Adult Supervision

I love this story so much thanks again for this amazing chapter 

Author's Response: Yes, thank you! You're welcome! 

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