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Reviewer: CapGregor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2024 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Interlude III

I have been waiting with bated breath for when you would have micros and nanos interact again. The bath chapters were golden. I would love to read about Parker fighting some insurrection or going full kaiju mode and ripping a rival city apart. Maybe even fight another ant. Kristen has really grown into her position as a goddess and caretaker for the cities, and what that means for Madelyn. Great stuff as always, Panzer.



Author's Response:

Yeah, this has been a plan for a long time coming for me to throw a micro into the nano room.  I think Parker is going to be the perfect character for that and I hope people enjoy what I have planned for her.  There could be some Kaiju mode coming lol.  Yeah, I really want to spend some time developing Kristen further as a person and character, explore her flaws and her leadership over the tinies.  Then, of course, develop Madelyn later on. 

Reviewer: stegosaurus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2024 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom

This is the best ongoing story currently published on this site. Thank you for the consistent updates. It's always a thrill to see a new chapter posted.

You have a knack for writing power dynamics. Anyone can throw adjectives together and describe a size scene, but few in this genre have the ability to make readers feel invested in characters like you do.

In case you like reader suggestions, here are a few:

  • More development of the cult worshiping the giant women
  • Scenes from the nanos' perspective describing life around the giant women
  • Nanos try to escape the room, explore the house



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm always thrilled to hear such high praise.  I hope to continue to make readers feel invested in my characters.  Welcome suggestions.  I will say that I have more cult and nano stuff coming up and I hope to develop more personal stories in the upcoming shift in the story. 

Reviewer: sp180 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2024 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Adult Supervision

Great chapter! I hope the nanos can share with Ginny, or any of the women, they perspective through their phones. They can share their sights and senses on her toes!



Author's Response:

I've thought about what the nano perspective would look like from their phones and cameras. I do think I can incorporate something like that in the upcoming shift in the timeline of the story. 

Reviewer: Giantess Nation Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2024 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Adult Supervision

This was one of the best chapters so far, and also one of the longest too (which is a great combination lol). Were it not for the nudity and the gratuitous sexual content, the violence and destruction of the battle and the giant Ginny monster would have made for a great action flick or giant-monster horror flick (or whatever genre this could rightly be classified as). If only we could convince hollywood to produce such a film, then that would be a pretty awesome thing to see. If such a movie ever were to be made, then I'd nominate Jeannie Mai https://www.instagram.com/thejeanniemai to star in the roll as the Ginny monster (her real name is even kinda similar). Whenever I read this story, I always think of her whenever imagining what Ginny looks like.

That said, it was cool that you wrote how Ginny's appearance is completely alien to the people of Ostrov because Asians or people like Asians don't exist on their home world. I know you'd written similarly in one of the earlier chapters about some of the micros, when she ate them on the banana. The cool thing about her exotic appearance being completely alien to them is that it synergizes very well with the whole giant monster thing. :) Having your cities attacked, devoured, fucked, etc. by a giant woman that seems familiar to you is one thing, but Ginny being something they've never seen before takes it to a whole other level. It probably causes them to be more intimidated and terrified of her. This same thing could also be true in the case of Rasha also, in any hypothetical future interactions they have... though she already did interact with them by stepping on them (though you didn't write an account of this from their perspective, but I wonder what they made of her appearance and whether it was exotic to them like with Ginny, etc.)

Speaking of Rasha, you may have something already in mind and if so don't let me interrupt you with that, but if you need a suggestion on where to take things with her character, I was thinking that she has probably been thinking it all over and might be connecting the dots on what is going on. Obviously she saw Ostrov (and stepped on it), but in addition to that, she also stepped on those weird "bugs" before that. Either one of those on their own is weird in itself, but both these things plus Kristen's strict secrecy regarding those rooms are things that might be running through her head and maybe she'll either figure it out based off just that, or its something that will eat at her and she'll need to find out and either snoop some more or confront Kristen about it... or maybe Kristen will confront her about having snooped (and lying about it).

Plus I see you now have Janelle peering into the windows also, so it doesn't look like things are boding well for the tinies... more and more people are becoming more and more aware of things and that's more and more potential people to cause destruction, so that's not a good thing... for them, but maybe it is good for the readers. :)

In regards to criticism of this chapter, the only thing I really felt was off was Ginny's ability to see the Ostrovian military as "particles". My math could be off, but I remember trying to calculate how small they would be in relation to her (and Kristen) when she is 200 miles tall, and the best I could figure out is that they would be roughly on par with the size of Bacteria, and even a human's skin cells would dwarf them. So I think that's a good rule of thumb to consider when writing them, because a naked human eye can't see something like a bacteria, not as dots, and not even as particles like the chapter says. Of course this isn't including larger things they have like military vehicles, tanks, etc. Those are good deal larger than a human so maybe those things would be perceptible as "particles" to her. If that's what you mean then I retract my criticism there.

That said, under a microscope they absolutely would be observable to her. If she could get them onto a slide then I think she could see certainly see them. But not with the naked eye is all.

That being said, all those "particles" being stuck to her dildo and then going inside of her ass was very hot. :) Just like you wrote from the perspective of Rev and the city she devoured, I'm sure that many of those "particles" are still alive, albeit lost somewhere deep inside of her ass. Its just a shame you hadn't written it from their perspective, but perhaps in the next chapter or something? ;)

Anyway, if I understand things correctly, this was an excellent juxtaposition here. Ostrov being the most powerful, respected, and perhaps feared nation on its planet, and having this powerful and respected military being defeated by a this woman's dildo, getting stuck to it, and then being plunged deep inside of her rectum... where presumably many of them still remain and are trapped. Yes, that is a very powerful juxtaposition indeed. I hope that isn't overlooked in the next chapter. :)

The idea of the nanos surviving on (or inside) of Ginny's body was something I've been thinking of since several chapters back when she squished that city (and several others) with her stinky nylon-clad feet. While many surely ended up dead, the advantage they have in being as tiny as they are is that it gives them some ability to evade being squished and killed to some extent. So I think it is safe to say there were many survivors that just got caught up in the fibers of those nylons to face an unknown fate... probably lasting until drowning when she put those nylons in the washer... or something like that.

The account you gave from Rev's perspective was good, and potentially he could last a good while in there. They're so tiny that even brushing her teeth might not clear them out, but if Ginny rinses her mouth with mouthwash then that would wipe them out for sure. I will say it was kinda sad that Rev won't be able to accomplish his goal of getting to work in that city... :(

Anyway, now that much or most (all?) of the Rebel military forces have been defeated and imprisoned inside of Ginny's rectum, and the dildo which sent them there has been planted into the ground to tower over the landscape like a monolith, I reckon there will probably be some fanatics coming to worship that just as there were with Kristen's heels. There's undoubtedly many people still stuck to the juices on it so that would be a major rescue operation to try to save them... but if they're rebels then maybe Justyna would just prefer to leave them rot there. Besides, the priority of the rescue forces should be to save her, right? :)

Very interesting to see where things will develop from here. Part of me kinda hopes that not all of the rebels were defeated by Ginny's dildo, so that the fighting isn't entirely over yet, and that way there can be more shenanigans in the next chapter too... but that of course is up to you.

Oh! One final thought about the nukes. Like you had written, they might have a hard time to kill the giants with them, but if they have a LOT of them and concentrate them, then maybe its possible they could kill Kristen, Ginny, or whoever. But if only just one or a few hit then it would probably just cause a bad blister or burn on the skin or something. The worst thing would be to target the eyes, as that would be the most vulnerable part.

Anyway, I remember way way way back in one of the earliest chapters of the story when that female mayor (whose name I can't recall at the moment) threatened to kill Madelyn (when she was a baby) and that of course naturally pissed Kristen off. This chapter with the stuff about the nukes sorta reminds me about that. If that female mayor still holds a grudge after all these years then she might want to acquire those nukes somehow. Even though those nukes are nano scale, the cities I presume don't have any nukes at all, so it seems like something she'd want to get in order to get her revenge. But I completely understand if you don't want the nanos and micros to interact, but that was just something that came to mind.

Anyway, this was a great chapter! I look forward to seeing how things unfold in the next.



Author's Response:

Thank you GN, I'm glad you think this was one of the best chapters!  Yeah, Ginny's appearance is Alien to most of the country and cities, and I hope to explore more of that later when I get to more of the perspectives from her followers which I plan to flush out later.  Same thing could happen with Rasha, I haven't really gotten to that yet. 

We'll see where things go from here, I always appreciate your analysis and suggestions and they do help me plan on where to take things. 

Reviewer: Kamaeli Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2024 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Adult Supervision

You don't disappoint! Lots of good things happening here.. I'm curious to see where these events will lead 



Author's Response:

Thank you, Kam!  :)  Glad you liked it.  I think we're going to see things calm down just a bit and set up for what I'm going to consider the next phase of the story. 

Reviewer: carnage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2024 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Adult Supervision

Finally caught up on this story, and as usual, it's fantastic. This chapter was so good. The part in Ginny's mouth, amazing. The part where her cum is drowning and crushing the city, unbelievable. Keep it up man. Two great stories going on right now.



Author's Response:

Lol thanks for catching up, I know it's a lot.  I really appreciate the compliments from you!

Reviewer: GiantessLover21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2024 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Adult Supervision

I love this story so much thanks again for this amazing chapter 

Author's Response: Yes, thank you! You're welcome! 

Reviewer: Kamaeli Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 25 2023 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Trust Your Friends

Solid last few chapters! You got me real hyped for the next ones with Ginny and her "whatever you want" guidance, kind of hoping she goes overboard lol, but I guess we'll see what she has in mind.. and of course I'm still wondering what Rasha will really be like once we get to know her.

I really like direction Kristen and Ginny have been going, regarding the micros/and nanos less and less as the story goes on; it's been rewarding seeing them go from cautious and careful and even caring for them to seeing them as insignificant lesser beings that exist just for their own wants and needs. They've tried to be kind and considerate, but have been let down and disrespected too many times to let it slide.

Side note, I like the parts of your tiny POV sections thar highlight the random individuals amd families across the land that have nothing to do with the politics and their whole situation yet are just the same forced to helplessly endure and try to ignore the acts going on above and around them.


Once again, looking forward to seeing the return of "Giant Monster Ginny" and what she has in store. Keep it up!! (And Merry Christmas!)



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Yeah, Ginny could absolutely go overboard, I'm just not sure how much yet lol.  Rasha will come and go I think until I think I can find a better way to introduce her to the world.  I think there's something really fun that I write with her, she has the potential to be a unique character. 

I think that was always to be the natural progression with Kristen especially, just more and more uncaring as they get more and more used to their absolute power without being challenged.  Personal challenges are really the only thing now that can sway someone one way or the other. 

Noted, I'll consider more random tiny POVs across the cities and country just as little fun side stories. 

Thank you for all your comments and reviews and support!

Reviewer: Giantess Nation Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2023 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Trust Your Friends

Well, this one ended on a cliffhanger. I have to say I'm still disappointed the conversation between Justyna and Kristen never happened... well, I guess it did, but it was never covered in the story. Oh well.

But I am very interested to see where this is headed. I just hope that there will be something left of Ostrov and the cities by the time Kristen gets back from vacation. :) I like some amount of destruction, I just like it to be at a sustainable level and not like genocidal.

Though I'm sure millions will be dead by the time Ginny is done with playing with it and "helping" Justyna out in her civil war thing. Justyna can call Kristen and Kristen can pass any messages on to Ginny, but maybe Justyna could just somehow communicate to Ginny directly through her laptop somehow? I dunno.

The civil war creates an interesting situation where the mass destruction Ginny is certainly going to do is justified... sorta. It will be interesting to see how that plays out. You wrote that she wiped out her own supply of tinies that she had living in her bathroom, so she'll need to stock up on more of them. Why not have her stock up on some nanos and have them living in her bathroom also? She could only really collect them up on an individual basis if she employed the help of the Micros to do that, but she could just scoop up an entire nano city wholesale and take that off home with her.

So instead of (or in addition to) having micros living in her medicine cabinet, she could also have nano cities inside her medicine cabinet also. The interactions possible would definitely be very different, but there is some very interesting potential there. You could introduce new characters who are mayors of these cities, and perhaps somehow they are able to call her up and communicate with her like Justyna does with Kristen.

She could put those nano cities to work doing things like cleaning her toothbrush or various things like that... or she could place a nano city on her bike seat when she works out just like she did with the micros... with far greater potential for casualties if she plops her butt down.... stuff like that.

Also, here's an interesting thought... the Micros she had taken previously were all volunteers. But because of this civil war thing, Ginny could snatch and take home rebel cities that fight against Justyna and so they would be anything but volunteers, but this would be a way to punish them. She could put the cities inside her panty liner, inside of her shoes, in the toilet, etc. Not because they're devout fanatics who volunteered for it, but because they are rebels who rose up against her friend Justyna and this is their punishment. Of course, even within "rebel" cities there would unfortunately happen to be a lot of innocents who were just there, but those are the breaks when you're tiny.



Author's Response:

I think I just have a much better conversation between Kristen and Justyna planned for later so I've been saving it. 

Nothing is genocidal until it is.  Ostrov is a massive, massive country with hundreds of millions of people, it would actually take a lot of effort from one of the giants to really get rid of too many all in one go. 

Yeah, we'll see what Ginny does, I think she doesn't do it for her people, she just always wanted to have gratification and attention she never got as a child and young adult. 

Reviewer: sp180 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 14 2023 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Trust Your Friends

Great set up between Ginny and the Nanos. I can't wait to see what fun Ginny is going to have between herself, the Nanos, and her bag of toys



Author's Response:

I think it's gonna be pretty sultry!

Reviewer: LittleBigPlanet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 14 2023 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Trust Your Friends

Nice Chapter.😋 It's fun to see a change with Ginny when left all by herself with the micro cities instead of Kristen 



Author's Response:

Yeah, she was actually pretty nice, huh?  Paint my nails and give them a little snack for doing a good job... or is that all she has planned?

Reviewer: GiantessLover21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2023 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Trust Your Friends

Perfect nothing else to say.

Author's Response:

And your reviews are always so nice!  Thank you lol

Reviewer: Giantess Nation Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2023 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 20 - The Birthday Girl

I apologize if the lengthy reviews I left annoyed you. I see you've responded to others, but not mine, and I'll assume that's the reason. So I'll try to keep it more brief this time.

The only negative thing I have to say is that the story seems to have skipped forward in time beyond the conversation Kristen was going to have with Justyna about the destruction she and Ginny caused a couple chapters back. Since Justyna was able to text her about Rasha getting into the room I'll take it as an indication their conversation went well since they're still on speaking terms, but I am disappointed the story skipped forward past.

With that out of the way, the chapter was otherwise great. Since Rasha's introduction into the story several chapters back, I hoped that she would get into the rooms (the Nano room specifically) one way or another, and this chapter did not disappoint. :) I'm very much interested in how things proceed from here.

I have to say, I saw it coming too. When you wrote about how Kristen placed the keys in the jewelry box before going to the party instead of taking them with her while Rasha and Madelyn played hide and seek, I just knew that was going to be a Chekhov's Gun. :)

Rasha's snooping would have been so easy to avert if Kristen had just taken those damn keys with her to the party. But of course, we WANT Rasha to snoop. The only other way would have been if she would have like picked the locks or went in through the window or something, and Rasha is too nice of a girl to do that sort of thing, so I guess it HAD to be this way.

Anyway, like I said I don't want to make this be too long and bother you, but I would like to show you a couple images I AI generated that were inspired by the events in this chapter:

https://www.deviantart.com/giantess-nation/art/Rasha-Discovers-Ostrov-991469102

https://www.deviantart.com/giantess-nation/art/Rasha-Steps-Into-Ostrov-991475090

I posted links on them to this story, so I hope that helps you get a bit more traffic and exposure. I also hope you don't mind that I've done that, but if its a problem I'll delete them if you want. As I explained in the descriptions, they're not as good as I'd have liked, but its the best I could get the AI to do.



Author's Response:

I don't mind the AI art, and I know it's difficult to get everything right, all I know is that Rasha would be much bigger and probably have one less toe lol, but awesome idea!

Reviewer: officerkc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2023 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 20 - The Birthday Girl

The story and Grove view are two of my favorite stories on this site. Always get excited when i site now stuff from you



Author's Response:

Thank you, that really does mean a lot to me.

Reviewer: GiantessLover21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2023 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 20 - The Birthday Girl

Perfect as always 



Author's Response:

Thank you, perfect is high praise.

Reviewer: Giantess Nation Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2023 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Doing our Jobs

This was an excellent addition, Panzer! I was expecting this chapter would feature the conversation between Justyna and Kristen, but I'll never complain about a slow rolling narrative. By all means, keep the narrative rolling as slowly as you like to. It is all the better for it, in my opinion.

These chapters from the perspectives of the tinies are well worth it. I understand it is not your favorite thing to write, but trust me,from the perspective of the reader it is well worth it. I guess its like how a steak is better when the butcher cuts the meat against the grain, which results in a more tender steak for the person who has to chew it with their teeth... something like that. Anyway, just saying the effort is appreciated even if its not your favorite thing to do. And as someone who has written a little bit myself, I can understand that.

The part you wrote with the man talking with the therapist in Servitus did an excellent job of conveying the psychological trauma their circumstances have had on the tinies, to find themselves on the floor of this giant woman, and all the associated horrors, tyranny, death and destruction surrounding this. The mental health impact this has caused to these millions of people is something that I wondered about myself awhile back. I'm glad to see this thought has occurred to you as well, and that you've addressed it with this segment. Again, it is a detail that I appreciate you've taken the time to write.

It does seem to me that Therapists would be one of those professions which would be in very high demand among the cities of the micros (and the nanos of Ostrov). So alongside the cleaning jobs, I imagine this would be among the top paying careers, since there is a lot of need for it.

Another thing aside from therapy which people often turn towards in difficult times of trauma like these people are experiencing is religion. And I see you are addressing this also in writing about the thousands of nanos making a pilgrimage to Kristen's heels and worshiping them. It does make sense some people would do something like that as a coping mechanism. I wonder also if it was something that Kristen herself thought would happen or hoped to encourage happening when she left those shoes there like she did.

Anyway, thinking about this further has given me some ideas I would like to suggest to you.  Kristen (and also Ginny) seem to be increasingly embracing the whole goddess thing, and it seems that many micros (and now nanos) are starting to embrace this also. But my question (and suggestion) revolves around this: what is their current religion(s)? Or what did they believe on their home worlds prior to being teleported into Kristen's house?

Odds are each city perhaps had its own sort of religion, if not various ones. In the years they've been in this situation I suspect many of them have leaned heavily on their old religion(s), but it is probably becoming increasingly clear that their old God(s) either don't exist or aren't going to do anything to help them, for whatever reason. Kristen (and Ginny), on the the other hand, undeniably does exist, and unlike the old God(s), she can even be communicated with and reasoned with (to some extent). This makes a very good selling point in trying to convert people from their old religion to worshiping Kristen/Ginny instead. Get what I'm saying?

I don't expect you to go into any great detail in describing the old religions of all these various places, but at least in the case of Ostrov in particular its one homogenous country, so you could go into some depth on whatever their "pre-Incident" faith was. And I think this sort of thing would be an excellent point of discussion between Justyna and Kristen in their upcoming conversation, so I'm glad you haven't written that just yet, so that you could first consider this idea.

The old religion of Ostrov might be monotheistic, polytheistic, or whatever. But I was thinking it would be cool if their old religion was like ancient Greek mythology or something like that, and they had a pantheon of dieties maybe, but also a supreme one like Zeus or whatever. Anyway, just like with ancient Greek Gods, imagine there are temples and statues dedicated to them all over Ostrov. Maybe in some city there is something like the Statue of Zeus or something from ancient Greece, but its of the Ostrov supreme deity, and this statue happens to be the largest structure in the entire country or something like that.

Well, obviously Kristen's heels now dwarf it (by a huge margin), so it would be a cool topic to bring that up in the conversation. Kristen's ego might even be such that she proposes the Ostrov religion be altered so that she be added to their pantheon, but now as their supreme God or something like that. She might still allow them to worship their old Gods, but they are now considered subordinate to her on the pantheon (or something like that).

Kristen might order them to alter or remake the statue(s) so that even though this (former) supreme deity was already very large and imposing and being one of the largest landmarks in Ostrov, it too is now dwarfed by a statue of Kristen, where the (former) supreme diety is now like a bug at her feet (or something like that). It would be pretty cool to have Kristen boost her ego by messing with their religion like this and reducing their supreme gods into her mere slaves.

I think this path also makes for a smoother transition than them just giving up their old gods entirely and just worshiping Kristen. It allows for a continuity between the beliefs of their ancestors to the present, and at the same time its just a cool way for Kristen to mess with them and inflate her ego. Reducing supreme immortal Gods into bugs at her feet is much more ego-boosting then to just having them abandon them and worship her instead.

That being said, I don't know what their religion is and its not my place to tell you what to write, so do whatever you want to do, but that's just a suggestion on my part that I thought was cool. Their religion could be monotheistic instead if you prefer, or I dunno. Also, if you don't like the idea of their old god(s) continuing to exist as bugs at Kristen's feet, then you could have the canon be that Kristen overthrew the old God(s) and killed them/squished them/ate them, whatever. And now she has usurped their power and authority. Or something like that... I dunno.

But I just thought this would be a cool idea to discuss changing the Ostrov religion (to center around Kristen) in the upcoming conversation between her and Justyna. Of course, there would be a lot of resistance. Even Justyna herself might consider it a red line and refuse to go along with this sacrilege. But as we see with the worship at Kristen's heels, there are many that would embrace this new religion. But it would cause massive social upheaval and perhaps even a civil war. But with Kristen's backing, we know which side would prevail in that. Anyway, don't feel obligated to write that, but its a suggestion. Its your story so do what you want.

Another train of thought that came to my mind was when the guy talking to the therapist about his fantasy of everyone returning to their old worlds in their old universes. I don't know if this is what you ultimately plan to happen, but I don't think it will, but it nonetheless raises some interesting thoughts. Obviously Kristen (and Ginny) have caused some enormous world altering changes to these cities/country, the hundreds of millions of people that live there, and even their religious beliefs. I expect this to continue to be the case as more and more years progress in the story. No one even knows what caused them to be teleported like that (and perhaps that is for the best, because not all questions need to be answered, or should be). So who knows if or how it could be undone? But just for the sake of hypothetical consideration, if it somehow were undone, it would be interesting to see how the changes these people and their realms would work out if returned to their original planets. Like for example, Ostrov being a major super power in that world, suddenly returns after years being gone, but now it returns with numerous cities reduced to dust, millions of its people dead, some new lakes and other features, a huge yoga mat dividing it in half, and hundreds of millions of people psychologically traumatized and with a new religious outlook. Would this traumatized Ostrov be able to recover and resume its former position as one of its world superpowers? Or would it be too psychologically (and physically broken) that other powers on its world just carve it up or something? Interesting questions to ponder. Also, if the new religion idea I suggested takes root before they returned, would it continue to flourish like some sort of Cargo Cult even in the absence of Kristen? Would other nations on that world pick up that religion?

I'm not suggesting that you write it like that, but it is some interesting stuff to ponder. I much more prefer that they remain where they are and where they belong: On the floor and at the feet of their goddess. :)

But that gives me a very evil but very exciting idea: what if it really does somehow become possible for the tinies to return to their home worlds, but Kristen refuses to allow them to leave because she enjoys her power over them too much? I loved the part in the previous chapter when she tells the people of Port Leslie that "you are my people" like she possesses them. :) But at least so far there hasn't actually been any way for them to return to where they came from. If that suddenly changed, and if Kristen refused to permit them to leave, then her path to the dark side would truly be complete. ;)

Reviewer: GiantessLover21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2023 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Doing our Jobs

One of the best so far for me eveything i enjoy the most in one chapter thanks you again 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Glad you like it. 

Reviewer: Giantess Nation Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2023 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Sunday Funday

Hi! I just finished reading this chapter, so I thought I'd leave a review. I can see that it is your longest chapter so far, and I want to tell you that it is appreciated. Don't hold back on the writing or the details.

I left a couple reviews over a month ago and I know you read at least one of them because you responded to the first one. And that was before this chapter came out, so I did have some thoughts in my head on how this chapter would turn out since Chapter 17. I did expect that Ostrov was going to be in a world of hurt because of how angry Kristen was in the last chapter, and my predictions turned out to be right. :)

But it wasn't quite what I predicted would happen. The assassins that tried to kill Justyna in the previous chapter seemed to have been pissed off by Kristen's lewd masturbation on the couch for all of Ostrov to see. So the thought that popped into my head was that Kristen was going to punish those assassins by masturbating herself over whatever city they were in, and I guess drowning them in her juices or something like that. I just thought that would be a more "poetic" punishment for them, since they would be killed by the very act that they tried to kill Justyna over. But oh well, either way they're certainly dead now. :) Along with, unfortunately, millions (?) of other Ostrovians.

Justyna has every right to be upset by this gratuitous slaughter of her people, so I am keenly intrigued by what the conversation that she will be having with Kristen in the next chapter will be like. They could have a complete falling out, a patching up, or really anything might happen. I'm very interested to find out how that goes. And yes, the animosity Ostrovians have to Justyna is still there, and actually no doubt even worse now, so this demonstration of power (which killed countless innocents in the process) has done nothing to make Ostrovians respect or love Justyna, but it may have made them fear her (by proxy). I note that this is the same dilemma Justyna's father faced himself, where he was damned either way when he tried to either interact with Kristen, or ignore her entirely. Either way is a losing prospect which results in millions of deaths regardless. And then to have your own people hate you for it to boot. Its not a good situation for any leader to be in, so I can imagine Justyna would be under that same stress and either want to retire from office (or follow her father's example). No matter who the "leader" of Ostrov is, they're ultimately just a puppet proxy ruler that answers to Kristen. Same goes for the micros in the city in the other room.

BTW, Ginny punishing the micros in Port Leslie with the stench of her feet was excellent. :) I like it because it humiliates them, but at the same time it doesn't cause a mass extinction event. Now that being said, in the case of the nanos in the other room it might be another story. The Micros "merely" suffered from the odor, but nanos being oh so very much smaller, it might actually be literally fatal to them. I'm no expert on the science involved here, but I do know that if you don't get enough oxygen, you die, and whatever the gasses that emanated from Ginny's stinky feet were, are definitely not oxygen. So its not just simply a matter of being an unpleasant thing to breath in her foot stink (though this is true), but since you're breathing that instead of breathable air, then you are probably going to literally die for real from it. And that's no joke (though the giantesses might think so).

I hope in the next chapter you'll give some account from the POV of the nanos on what the smell was like or did to them. Since her nyloned feet didn't linger over them for very long, and since there was some amount of time for them to air out as she walked through the hall without her heels on, that probably helped somewhat, but again, the nanos are massively smaller than the micros, so stuff is going to hit them a lot harder, including feet odor. If they got the Port Leslie treatment from Ginny's feet freshly extracted from the shoes, well it might have caused the death of millions in that vinegary scent... like a mustard gas attack during WW1 or something.

So far you've had the Micros cleaning Kristen's sandals and some heels, but though those are pretty bad (for them), it would be massively worse if they were made to clean a pair of jogging sneakers which are going to reek far worse. I think its also a much more degrading thing to force them to clean some plain old sneakers, since at least in the case of heels that is some classy footwear, but sneakers on the other hand are not. So not only is the smell worse, but its a more humiliating thing to be made to service. So consider that for the future.

Also please consider other things too, like sweaty socks, or Ginny's nylons like she wore in this chapter. As those can really soak up the smell also.  In fact, even more than shoes, probably. Just place a pair of sweaty socks in the room, and all the millions of people in the room are going to suffer just from it being in the room. Even moreso if they're made to clean them (though I don't know how they even would clean socks).

When I was reading that part about Kristen's silver heels, and how she wore them during her meetings with the micros and nanos and did some destruction with them and ultimately left them in the nano room to intimidate them, it occurred to me that it would be a good thing for your story to include the juxtaposition of Kristen wearing things like this in her normal every day life and her interactions with Madelyn, or work, or whatever, and then again later the devastating impact those same items have to the little people in the rooms. And this is something that can happen in reverse, because at the end of the chapter you wrote about her going to work with some micro crew trapped inside of her shoes, so she's taking them to work with her. And if you do write about her experience at work that day, you could say something about them inside her shoe, how she feels them, or if she takes them out to do something with them, or even from their own perspective, etc. But as for the other way around, I mean to say it makes for a great juxtaposition to write about how she had stepped on an ant during her time at work, and the squished remnants of the ant stuck to the show is then something extra the tinies have to deal with when cleaning them. Or, how she went on a date and went dancing and worked up a sweat, which again has some implications for the tinies when they are forced to deal with it. Or maybe, I dunno, Madelyn draws on Kristen's shoes with crayons (or something), and then cleaning that off becomes the assignment for the tinies. Its these really mundane things that might happen to her footwear in Kristen's everyday life that you could write about in those segments, then later the juxtaposition of that same footwear and its impact on the tinies. I felt this was a missed opportunity in this chapter, because there was no mention of those silver heels in those day to day life segments. Something like that would have made it more interesting, in my opinion.

Just some stuff to think about.

I do want to comment on the 180 degree shift in morality of Kristen in Ginny. In my first review I applauded the slow and gradual development of Kristen to get to this point, and how this is in my opinion preferable to the vast majority of stories where the giantess is cruel and evil right from the very start. But regardless of the slow development to get to this point, Kristen and Ginny are now there. This is both good and bad at the same time. When you responded to my first review you said it would take a lot of calamites before the population is reduced to a scary level, but I dunno. The like 15 minutes or so Kristen and Ginny spent in that room probably killed millions of people in that short space of time. And yes, we're talking about a nation of hundreds of millions. But they probably killed like 1% of the population in that short period of time and that's not an insignificant blow for such a space of time. It wouldn't have been so bad if Kristen correctly identified the right city the first time and only wiped out that one, but even then that's massive overkill for a couple assassins. And they are completely indifferent to all these deaths, which is the total opposite of where things started. Like I said, its a double edged sword. There's both good and bad things to say about it.

Its kinda weird, too, that you wrote Ginny being a Vegan, so she's against eating animals, but eating tiny humans (even on accident) doesn't seem to bother her in the slightest. Its a really strange contradiction. IIRC, this was before she even knew that the micros were people. Because she ate that piece of banana even though she knew it was covered with (what she thought were) "ants", but despite being "vegan" she still ate it anyway. Either way, it just seems to go against her character, whether its eating humans or even just (what she thinks are) bugs. Because actual vegans don't eat bugs, and they certainly wouldn't eat people either. I dunno... it just seems like an odd break in character in my opinion.

But anyway, even though Leslie's visit got Kristen to embrace her power and dominance (and I'm not saying this is a bad thing), it is possible to ease back on this a little, even if just temporarily. For example, when Kristen has her conversation with Justyna in the next chapter, you could have Justyna show her videos of the death and destruction that her actions caused, and maybe this causes her to have a twinge of guilt and remorse and she regains some of the humanity she had lost... even if just temporarily.

Reviewer: sp180 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2023 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Sunday Funday

Amazing as always. I really like how characters are being introduced, alluded to, and basically teased towards the reader.

The toes wafting was peak. 

I like how Ginny keeps her micros as self improving toys. I also like how Kristen and Ginny are becoming more sexually comfortable with each other through their discipline of the Micros and Nanos.

Hoping for more Nano direct interactions, like what Ginny does with her Micros.



Author's Response:

I promise there will be more nano interactions!  Thank you for the kind words!

Reviewer: GiantessLover21 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 17 2023 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Sunday Funday

This chapter is really good as always i love the evolution between Kristen and the micro people, i love when the giantess become more and more confident in her own power. And the part with Ginny stinky feet is the cherry on top. Good job Panzer 

Author's Response:

Thank you!  Glad you loved the cherry on top.

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