Reviewer: Greenanon Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16 2022 3:44 AM Title: Adverse Effects

I like your worldbuilding additions to the appendix stuff, the "blood of the gods" staining the Glalan atmosphere for example. There are a few more reasonable Glalans on Prime of course, Telara for example, but Procerita as a hardened and famous marauder might not be the best advocate for a less aggressive foreign policy. There are only rarely Aelmari on Glalan Prime, so it should give our protagonists some breathing room. That executioner, I'm getting vibes like she's not only still alive she's maybe forgetting about that Aelmari Mission and is maybe developing some... extra features in the same way that Aelmari do in the main story, but in a far less positive way lol.

looking forward to where this is going, keep it up!