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Reviewer: Greenanon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2022 10:01 PM Title: Peira the Pirate

Haven't gotten a chance to review the last couple chapters until now, just wanted to say I'm following the story here and I like how the protagonists have grown closer. I'm sure these space pirates don't know what they're getting into. I didn't think this chapter was particularly bad by the way, but I totally get that sometimes you've just got to move a plot forward.


Author's Response:

It’s definetely not awful, it’s just the first chapter I got particularly flustered with. Near the end I was just throwing ideas at the wall because I couldn’t get the idea that Peira had human-proofed the room out of my head. 

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