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Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 18 2022 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Enter stage Left - The Mouse

I'm really enjoying the dynamic between Kat and Mouse now that theyre both here. I'm hoping Kenda's affection for Jordan runs deeper than just viewing him as a possession. I don't know how to feel about her being passively abusive towrads him despite her claims of caring for him but it doesnt feel healthy. 

I really like that Jordan wants to be sonewhat autonomous despite his frail condition similar to Alejandro before him. It really makes me root for him to succeed in his career aspirations or at least succeed in gaining some respect from Kenda. I just want their relationship to succeed in the long run.

I'm pretty invested in the plot despite the somewhat slow start. I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Not gonna lie, I don't really remember what happened in each chapter, it's an old story for me now, oopsie ! But it means I can't spoil you guys even if I wanted to, haha !

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