Date: February 28 2024 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
shame there was nothing with miss nelson
[Report This]Date: July 16 2022 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved the latest chapter!
Sorry to hear about your writers block. I think you have come close to exploring some really neat ideas. Hopefully I can shed some light on them. In both insertion scenes, jack “does his business” and it’s pretty straight forward. I think some more time in a womb would be a great place to explore some fun things. What it’s like in there by himself maybe, or when something else intrudes? (If you know what I mean...)
another option is for Jack to go inside... the other direction. That’s has lots of potential.
I still think there’s room for many chapters ahead, I’ll be eagerly awaiting the next update!
Author's Response:
Well, it's more of a personal preference...To my mind, I find it quite a turn off to read about male masturbation and stuff, more so write about it. I don't know...I believe that readers would be more interested in reading about giantesses and futas (again it's the whole dominance thing that is arousing, hence the male genitals), even descriptions about a giantess's female anatomy (inside the womb), and not when a micro is busy doing his job...All in all, it's against the whole feeling of submission and vulnerability the reader experiences in front of an enormous woman...An act like male breeding is considered dominant which is against the concept... Hope that makes sense...kind off...
Thank you for the feedback!
Date: June 12 2022 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good stuff. Considering the number of futas in the castle and the size difference, I wonder if we'll end up seeing any unaware scenarios due to Jack getting misplaced or winding up in bad situations.
[Report This]Date: May 26 2022 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Just found this in Most Recent. Very good couldn't stop reading it. Currently at chapter 7. You asked for some game ideas. I decided to focus on futa games since that's what makes this story unique along with the size ratio. Assume the girls are going to torture Jack. But, "safety first" since he's the hero. So, how about these:
1. Target practice - stuck to the wall like darts but using futa cum.
2. Target practice - Jack as a moving target on a table.
3. Swimming lessons - Jack in a cup that the girls slowly fill with cum.
4. Dunk tank - Jack perched on the lip of a cup of water while girls shoot cum.
5. Penis pickup - Jack in cup. Time how long it takes for hands free penis to descend an suck him up.
6. Penis pickup free range - Jack is out of the cup and tries to evade the hungry cocks.
Unique story. Rare to find something new and well written. Hard to know where you'll go next. Seems like you already did all the good stuff.
Reminds me of the excellent Windfall Futa Ciri 3D Animation (use Google or try the following URL):
rule34.us/index.php?r=posts/view&id=3414084
Author's Response:
Thank you for the ideas, helped a lot as seen by chapter 8. To be honest, the entire concept of sick games was inspired by poopoodoop's chapters in the interactive story "SHRUNKEN AT HOME WITH SHEMALE SISTERS" on writing.com. Plenty of similar content there.
Anyway, thanks for the review!
Date: May 25 2022 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Okay so first of all. Story is great.
I’m a bit of a picky idiot so feel free to ignore my criticisms here, but there seems to be a few formatting errors. Small things that make it distracting or difficult to read.
Such as no space after . Or ,
Or Dialogue not having its own space.
Other than that it’s quite good.
[Report This]Date: May 19 2022 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
One of the best stories I’ve read in a while. I hope to see more unique situations and updates to this story!
My only one critique is I think there should be more visual imagery for the size comparisons, just so the reader can get a better idea of the size of the giantesses compared to the main character.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. As for the relative size of the protagonists, I try not to be so specific about them (just mentioned in the first chapters they are about 400 feet tall give or take) so that the readers can fill in the gaps with their imagination. I find it very unappealing to keep measuring them so I try to make indirect comparisons,for example a nightstand that towers about 80 feet above Jack is about knee length to the giantess, a 200 feet round table is about waist high etc... That's a personal preference though.
Anyway, thanks for the read!
[Report This]Date: April 18 2022 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hottest story I have seen on this website in a while.
Author's Response:
Thank you,glad you enjoyed it.Hopefully there's more to come.