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Reviewer: Scruba76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2023 11:08 AM Title: Part 10

I am absolutely loving your story so far, I love how Bethany has just given her brother to her 350 pound coach, I’m so glad Bethany didn’t take Devon from Suzanne, he belongs to Suzanne now and I just love her using him in her dirty arse, Suzanne needs him headfirst in her dirty arse more and more, she needs to realise that’s where he belongs, keep up the amazing work, i really enjoy reading your story 



Author's Response:

glad you liked it but i actually didnt have a great time with writing it so it's gonna be ending where it is (which i think is a pretty solid end anyways)

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