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Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05 2022 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved the image of Belena just leaning over the city wall to talk with someone on a balcony. I didn't expect the guards to allow the princess to climb into the giantess's hand unescorted. Not that they could do anything to hurt her but I was expecting more resistance to the idea at least.



Author's Response: Thanks for the review! You're right, there wouldn't be anything the guards could've done to stop Belena, and I think they were all still a bit overwhelmed by her presence, making them neglect their guard duty.

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