[Report This]Date: April 06 2023 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 1: Extending the Olive Branch
I wish I was more adept at giving specific feedback but I will just simply say that the story was absolutely phenominal, and it's the level of worldbuilding, storytelling and quality that I hope to emulate with my own writings. The characters, the scenarios, the flow of the story, all great.
This story is probably up there as one of my favorites and I am excited to see more of these characters for a potential sequel.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it, and I hope you enjoy the sequel!
[Report This]Date: October 16 2022 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 1: Extending the Olive Branch
I keep coming back to this story. It's really just so well imagined and written and such a solid concept and narrative. The idea that growing made an alpha-bully-asshole vulnerable was so interesting and completely well done.
Date: July 07 2022 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 1: Extending the Olive Branch
Good story, kind of an abrupt ending though. It felt like it was going to go on for a fair bit longer.
Author's Response: I absolutely agree. That ending was too abrupt. I think there’s a bit more to Finn and Katelyn’s story to tell! Thanks for your feedback, Kessler! The story isn’t over yet.
Date: June 29 2022 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: Extending the Olive Branch
Liking the story, giantess going from cruel to kind is always fun; even if in this case the cruel part as in the backstory and before she became a giantess. One potential concern is that the tags are a bit of a spoiler on her eventual cure and how it won't be 100% effective but I suppose that's just an unavoidable result of doing tags properly.
Author's Response:
Yeah, the tags thing can be a double edged sword
Date: June 18 2022 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 1: Extending the Olive Branch
Loving the chapters so far just made an account after years of being on this site to say your work seems great
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: June 17 2022 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 1: Extending the Olive Branch
Be funny to see him be bullied by some other person and she defends him or something
Date: June 16 2022 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: Extending the Olive Branch
I’m loving this story soo much. Every since you’ve posted the second chapter I’ve been coming back to see if you’ve updated your story. But you haven’t yet, please post an update soon I can’t wait to see how they will interact with each other later in the story
[Report This]Date: June 16 2022 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: Extending the Olive Branch
Really liking this story so far, can't wait to see where it goes.
Date: May 28 2022 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 1: Extending the Olive Branch
I had a blast with the story. I love the dread he felt when he realized his gigantic bully was looking for him and how, despite his best efforts, she got a hold of him.
I look forward to read more chapters or stories from you. Hopefully, Kat gets to finally enjoy being a giant now that she is making amends.
Date: May 27 2022 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 1: Extending the Olive Branch
Good start. I'm a huge sucker for redemption arcs, so I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. If it wasn't for the gentle tag, I'd be worried this was some kind of elaborate setup to mess with Finn, but thankfully it looks like that's not where this is going,
Date: May 26 2022 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 1: Extending the Olive Branch
Great story can't wait to see where it goes do you do giant couples stories
Date: May 26 2022 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: Extending the Olive Branch
Looking forward to seeing where this goes! It might be fun to see what kind of conditions our giantess lives in these days
[Report This]Date: May 26 2022 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 1: Extending the Olive Branch
Great start and definitely one of the more promising stories on here in a while! I hope she gets really huge and toys with him and a whole city!
[Report This]Date: May 26 2022 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 1: Extending the Olive Branch
Well I’m hooked. Def interested iin those tags lol, but for now the pacing is spot on.
[Report This]Date: May 26 2022 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 1: Extending the Olive Branch
Loving the introduction to the story so far. I'll mirror what some others have said, I love stories with bullies ending up in relationships with their former victims. Given the tags, I could definitely imagine some roleplay between them of her still being the bully and now being the perfect size for her to really show off their new power dynamic.
[Report This]Date: May 26 2022 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 1: Extending the Olive Branch
Love the setup here, you've laid the groundwork for a great relationship.
I know some might disagree, but I love the trope of female bullies crushing on, or developing a relationship with their former targets.
There's something there that just has an appeal.
Can't wait to see what scenarios they'll get up to together when they start growing closer.
As I said, you laid a great groundwork here with this first chapter and I can't wait to read more. You wrote both characters so well, and the dialogue and interaction was done great.
Date: May 26 2022 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 1: Extending the Olive Branch
Following up that sweet ... sweet leaf story, its good to see you tackle a favored scenario of mine, the giantess bully who ends up becoming enamored with her target, or at least, that's how I think this story will go. I do have an affinity for girls named Katelyn, and she actually seems pretty sweet on the onset. I do like that you give us a taste of what her bullying was like, with that comment about Finn's mother, I hope she maintains that, even if she's trying to be nice. It's just consistent characterization, and it will be either something she gradually grows out of, or Finn discovers that he likes a little teasing now and then.
One critique I have is that the reason Katelyn becomes nice is sort of laid out for us to see all at the beginning. I believe a better choice would have been to gradually reveal the reason why she decided to be nice to Finn. We were told, not shown, the method behind her change of heart. Simply excluding her explanation, and leaving Finn to speculate that she's attempting some cruel prank I believe would have provided better characterization, and Finn would gradually learn to trust her later on.
But, I love me some cutsey romance between former enemies. It's a fun time, so I'll be sticking around.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your feedback! I understand that I need to work on showing, not telling, for future chapters. Hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: May 26 2022 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 1: Extending the Olive Branch
This story is a very fun cute little scenario, I like the idea and am interested in where this particular story could go. It seems there's a lot of potential with the relationship dynamic between Finn and Kate, and also with her being bigger than most buildings, it could very well lead to some interesting scenarios for the story and whatever happens in the next chapter.
I'm very interested in what happens next, though can't rate it much as we don't have the full picture. Keep up the good work, Anon!