Reviewer: Wizalex Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26 2022 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 7: Party Queen

This chapter makes for a really great insight into how Katelyn acted before her growth. She's been playfully demeaning before, but she really embraces her ability to be the biggest personality in the room here.
I really liked her letting loose. She's been cooped up and kept away from everything she used to love for so long, I think it makes total sense that she might go a bit overboard. Sure, it doesn't suggest the healthiest relationship, but growing into changed people is what this story has at its core.
I'm just hoping that the doctor has some news about the risk of additional growth.
Great chapter, looking forward to the next one!

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: November 20 2022 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 7: Party Queen

Another great chapter here :) 

Glad to see more of this story and it's continuation.

This chapter was wild XD

On one hand Katelyn was having a ton of fun (and definitely loved her putting Tina in her ass crack XD)


I hope Tina takes this as a lesson to not fuck with Katelyn any more.

But on the other hand, she did get a bit out of hand and didn't listen to Finn and humiliated him (whether drunken/without malicious intent or not)

I mean hey, if they were having kinky sexy fun and she put him in her armpit, that's different than doing it in front of a whole party when he is telling her he doesn't want to/wants her to calm down.

I hope they resolve the issue and make up in the next chapter, it seems Katelyn had a realization (and ensuing drunken crying/emotional moment) and will most likely be all apologetic, I hope Finn doesn't go too hard on her, but she still will need to apologize. 

Finn and Katelyn are still perfect together, I do love their relationship as a couple and again it's a great story you've woven between them and their growth together (hehe, not necessarily physical) but emotionally and how they are in love.

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Writing wise you continued to write these characters well and the interaction when Katelyn is big is also continued to be well written, picturing her chugging the keg's of beer, and then getting bigger and just crushing one open with her teeth, etc. 

And the armpit scene XD (as much of an issue as that was for Finn) was also really cool and described well.

Can't wait to read more, and hoping Finn and Katelyn make up over her drunken shenanigans.