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Reviewer: breastclimber Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24 2024 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 13. An Avoidable Conflict II

So yeah, I did like this chapter a bit more.  Even seeing Ana and Leon at the beginning of the chapter helped a bit.    Maybe the other squad just put me off more.



Author's Response:

By other squad I’m assuming you mean platoon 3? If so, yeah. That’s fair enough. They’re made to be more rebellious and less prone to Ana’s ideology and way of thinking. More so representing the already present ideology of Ranate's culture that existed before. This chapter didn’t feature them, and Instead depicted platoon 1 and 2, which lack characters that are overly cruel. It’s understandable in disliking the platoon 3 members in that way. Though I will say, the next chapter will feature them heavily. 

Also, glad to hear you liked the Ana and Leon scene at the start. After these batch of chapters we should go back to the two! So that’ll hopefully be exciting. 



Author's Response:

By other squad I’m assuming you mean platoon 3? If so, yeah. That’s fair enough. They’re made to be more rebellious and less prone to Ana’s ideology and way of thinking. More so representing the already present ideology of Ranate's culture that existed before. This chapter didn’t feature them, and Instead depicted platoon 1 and 2, which lack characters that are overly cruel. It’s understandable in disliking the platoon 3 members in that way. Though I will say, the next chapter will feature them heavily. 

Also, glad to hear you liked the Ana and Leon scene at the start. After these batch of chapters we should go back to the two! So that’ll hopefully be exciting. 

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