[Report This]Date: June 05 2022 5:18 AM Title: New perspective
You have a slick reveal of the giantess, and paced out the exposition really well. Emily is given some really sweet characterization, and you feel much sympathy for her, even though her function is similar to the Rancor in Jabba's palace. I've seen a few giantess execution stories, many tend to go real hard with the cruelty, but this one tends to be actually rather endearing, for some strange reason.
I think what ties it together is the tiny characters. John is a noble soul, but he has reasonable fears for his execution, especially at someone who does not appear naturally malevolent. Nathaniel, I'm not so sure is going to be noble, he seems to be some sort of trickster type, perhaps even a deity, kind of like Q from Star Trek.
Look forward to the next installment.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! I am doing my best to write well and describe everything thoroughly. I am glad that it is working and that the story is interesting!
Yes the idea of a giantess being forced to execute people seemed really interesting to me so I decided to write my own story about it. Next chapters are definitely coming. I've tried out a couple of ideas and this one seems to be holding well so I am determined to finish it!