[Report This]Date: July 13 2013 10:40 PM Title: Back in business
Yaaaaaaaaaay!!! Thank you SO much for continuing this story! One of my all time favorites! :D
Date: July 04 2013 6:21 PM Title: Back in business
Well here's a treat. I had half suspected this story was dead D:
Only to find an update today out of the blue.
All I can say is yay =D
[Report This]Date: May 07 2013 4:49 PM Title: Back in business
Okay - just had to say that I registered on this site (again) JUST so I could get on my hands and knees and beg you to finish this story. I keep coming back to read this story again and again and praying to find it finished or at LEAST continued. You also ended it RIGHT where it gets REALLY good... if you know what I mean? ;)
I hope you will continue this amazing story. I absolutely love the relationship between Bobby & Jen and love that we get both SW and SM in different cycles. This story is genious and very well written. 5 stars, man. ;)
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks so much for your kind words. I do have plans for this story and will definitely get around to continuing it. Thanks again
[Report This]Date: February 27 2012 8:38 AM Title: Back in business
Ah! A resurrected classic. Let's see if it's been ret-conned from the first version I remember.
Date: March 29 2011 6:52 PM Title: Back in business
ashley and sarah are doing the samething as bobby and jen airnt they? whao
[Report This]Date: July 15 2010 1:26 PM Title: Back in business
*sighs* looks like another great story has been forgotten. How much longer til a new chapter >_
Date: July 09 2009 9:29 PM Title: Back in business
love how everything seamless flows together. well done. love the cliff hanger. very nice and clean, yet realistic. looking forward to next chapter.
Date: June 16 2009 9:00 PM Title: Back in business
A great start you're off to!
I like the method in which you retell the original story, scattering bits and pieces of it throughout the chapter. It coincides with Bobby's all over the place line of thinking very well. I also like how he says he won't "bore us with the details" as to why his girlfriend is only three inches tall.
You've set up a great rapport between Jen and Bobby early on. They aren't "all lovey-dovey" all the time, but rather sound like a real couple (except for the one obvious exception).
I gotta admit, Sarah still kinda rubs me the wrong way, but that's going back to the original. I'm interested to see if things really are okay between them when Bobby is his regular size, as he claims they are.
Again, you are off to a fantastic start.
Oh, and CaryComic, consider yourself lucky that I still don't know how to throw tomatoes across the internet.
[Report This]Date: June 16 2009 5:41 PM Title: Back in business
Hmmm! If the pockets of Jen's waitress-skirt are short enough to see through (if only silhouettes), then they're thin enough to tear.
Add a busy restaurant within walking distance of a co-educational college? And, you've got plenty of chances for Bobby to become both a "drop-out" and the object of "pick-ups."
*Reviewer cups hand to ear, listening for groans.*
Author's Response: lol yeah that was lame, but she's not wearing a skirt. She's wearing jeans but wearing an apron over it so I can't see too well (since Im tucked in her pocket)