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Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2022 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

I need more of this XD

I know this says complete, but I would not be opposed to reading more if you continued. 

I feel like you really got me attached to these two characters, and this world, and now I just want to read more and see how their relationship grows, and just how their stories continue. 

Hope you decide to write more, cause I would definitely read it. 

I feel you weren't disrespective, and handled the character of Morgan really well. And Lomasi was well written too. 




Author's Response:

Wish granted~.



Author's Response:

Wish granted~.

Reviewer: Videofreak64 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 20 2022 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

Enjoying the character dynamics, feel pretty realistic and work well with the story. 

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