Date: July 27 2022 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
Yay!! :D I am so happy you decided to continue this story.
I had re-read the first chapter so many times and when I saw this was updated I jumped in to read it straight away.
I love how you've progressed Morgan and Lomasi's relationship here. The interaction between them throughout this chapter was great, loving and adorable and I loved every second of it. I love their dynamic,
Also working in the two smaller shrinkees at the theatre was a nice touch of expanding their world and showing how smaller shrinkees than Lomasi would have to survive if not having proper homes, etc.
I am loving Lomasi and Morgan still, their relationship is well written and I again am just wanting more XD
You wrote them both great, and the dialogue and interactions as I said were really written well.
I can't wait to read more of them :D