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Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2022 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 3

I wasn't expecting an update this fast but was happy to see one posted :D 

Firstly, Morgan and Lomasi continue to be an adorable amazing couple (couple goals with size differences XD)

I loved that you broached more into Morgan's past here and we got a brief glimpse of some of her history with the swimming spot. 

The build up to her bikini reveal was cool, and you captured her hesitation and fears over how she would look really well. As you did with Lomasi's comforting nature. 

The floating scene were they were talking and leading into the emotional makeout session was also well done XD Morgan is a sappy romantic. 

And FUCK HER PARENTS! Especially her mother, they had to come along and (unknowingly but still) ruin her day and make her feel like shit. 

I hope Morgan and Lomasi return their later on at some point and try and make more good memories (I mean they don't have to as said, every memory with Lomasi is a good memory XD) but still, her parents shouldn't taint a spot where she can have fun with the woman she loves. 

Another great chapter, I loved every paragraph of it. And you continue to write these so perfectly, can't wait to read more.

Keep up the great work :D 

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