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Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2022 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 5

Sorry for the late review here. I missed this update before.


I love seeing you expand the world out more and showing the effects the shrinking phenomenon has on these other people who aren't as fortunate as Lomasi's family, etc.

David being an outlier member/helper is another nice touch :)

Lara has been through some horrific stuff, Bridget should be more mindful about that, I mean she has visible reminders. 

A great chapter, I am heading off to read the next right away :)

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