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Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2022 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 12

OK this chapter was great XD (well every chapter is)

But I loved the next step Morgan and Lomasi have taken, moving in together. It also was a real emotional moment when Lomasi was talking about how Morgan was using funds she'd put aside for her transitioning, and how Morgan comforted her, etc. 

And the teasing and cute moments between them this chapter were adorable, and I loved reading them.

And how Lomasi felt big and in charge when they were in bed, a great look into their growing private-sex life.

It's also great that Morgan is finally willing to go all the way and try going that extra step, it feels realistic and genuine that they have been thinking and talking over this for all this time, and finally she's ready to try penetrative intercourse. (and remembering what happened to Lomasi's sister is a good callback, etc)

Great work on this chapter as always, it was nice to get back to a more Lomasi/Morgan focussed chapter after the previous ones have been more world-building/supporting character focussed. 

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