[Report This]Date: October 06 2022 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 16
I was so happy seeing another update :) Perfect way to start the morning.
Great work on this chapter, as always it was well written, the dialogue was perfectly in-character for the pre-established ones (Lomasi is as always, a hilarious gremling XD)
As well as doing a great job on the newly introduced characters, this felt like a real family reunion/birthday gathering.
I loved the introduction of Martha, she seems like a cool relative to have and takes no shit from people (including her bitch daughter)
It's nice to have another family member in Morgan's corner, as well as the introduction of her twin cousins. They seem like a fun twosome, hopefully *not* keeping Eric against his will.
I laughed when Lomasi jumped up and started making out with Morgan to hide her from her bitch-Karen mother XD The visualization of that was hilarious.
It's also great seeing Gwen doesn't have as much support in her transphobic views as she believed.
Really enjoyed this chapter, another great expansive one in terms of characters. Can't wait to read more.