[Report This]Date: July 23 2022 10:03 AM Title: Prologue
I love the story, it's very adult and the nonchalant cruelty with which the toys are treated seems most realistic to me. I hope that there will be other incursions soon, perhaps with Sara as an ambassador to the little people.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I try to make it as real as I can taking into account the feeling of power that overcomes normal people when they can manipulate the pretty and defenseless little people at will.
Yes, there will be more raids, of all kinds, and since you mention it, I have already thought of something for Sara to show her "good will" in one of them.
Greetings.
[Report This]Date: June 22 2022 7:30 PM Title: Prologue
You are an excellent writer, if it reads this well using a translator, I can’t imagine how eloquent it must be in your native tongue. Yes, please continue. It’s been a while since a story has kept me on the edge of my seat like this!
Author's Response:
Thank you, but I still see mistakes that I am slowly correcting.
I have seen in your profile that maybe you write a story and that your preferences are sadistic (as they should be) I am already waiting for your work to read it...
[Report This]Date: June 22 2022 7:27 PM Title: Prologue
You are an excellent writer, if it reads this well using a translator, I can’t imagine how eloquent it must be in your native tongue. Yes, please continue. It’s been a while since a story has kept me on the edge of my seat like this!
[Report This]Date: June 21 2022 2:39 PM Title: Prologue
Pretty good start!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like the story. If you have any suggestions, not related to the hellish online translator review, I'll listen to you.