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Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2022 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 3

Really liking the goofy feel of this story and its characters. I really like Carol as a gentle witch since its typically not the norm and it really makes me root for her even if seeing her lose herself to her lust is entertaining from time to time. Hoping neither Asmodea or Mary get their ways since I just want James and Carol to be happy lol. Love this story and hope to see more!



Author's Response:

I think you'll be happy with how it all ends up, as will James and Carol. As for Mary and Asmodea, well they might not get everything they want lol.

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2022 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 3

It almost seems reasonable that Mary accepts James devotion to Carol in his shrunken form and leaves them to live out their lives as a tiny submissive and a normal sized Dominatrix witch.

Can't wait to see how this story goes.



Author's Response:

Not sure how much it's come across so far but Mary is not reasonable lol

Reviewer: kenrios Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2022 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 3

Oh wow it's fun. I saw some references to the Malleus Maleficarum or the Hammer of the Witches, some historians classify it as the most bloodstained book in the entire history of mankind. It instructed how to locate, torture and kill women who were considered witches. I guess a witch hunter would have something like that but it's funny the fact that Carol touched the blessed steel and didn't get burned which perhaps implies that she isn't possessed by evil. James trying to get away from the reduction source. I'm dying to see when James finds out that his landlady and source of his love is the cause of his downsizing. It will be exciting. As exciting as another of your stories, Green. You really do have a knack for this. Keep it up.



Author's Response:

Carol isn't evil yet, obviously Asmodea wants her to be, and Mary's biggest problem is she hasn't considered that there would be a witch that wouldn't be evil. How will it all play out for James? I guess we'll see!

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