[Report This]Date: July 21 2022 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 6
Your combination of a multilayered plot and James slow shrinkage is an amazing story line.
What ever happens, one wants James to belong to Carol the landlord witch; and perhaps Mary having a tiny of her own, perhaps Asmodea as her tiny familiar.
Your descriptions of James within Carol's panties and pussy are fantastic; to bad he didn't take up Carol's offer of spending the day in the back of her panty {i.e. "front or back of the panties?” She slapped her ass for emphasis.
“Front,” he said without thinking.
Carol shrugged, “your loss,”}
What a loss it must be; yet one Carol recognizes as a place to keep her tiny James.
Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
We're coming up to the final showdown, Mary and Asmodea have a few cards left to play and obviously Carol's attempts to fix James might get... dicey.
[Report This]Date: July 19 2022 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 6
This story is great! I love the interaction between all the characters. I hope that James and Carol have a relationship where James constantly fluctuates between sizes when Carol comes up with a cure. I think I might see Mary willing to take Asmodea as a familiar for herself, but keep her tiny
Author's Response:
Thanks, obviously this won't be the last time James gets tiny if he wants to keep dating Carol!
[Report This]Date: July 19 2022 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter. He's really getting tiny now. Looking forward to more micro interactions!
Author's Response:
Yeah he's going to be very small by the end
[Report This]Date: July 19 2022 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 6
Honestly, I’m loving the Carol and James scenes way too much, that I found myself kinda bored with the Mary and Asmodea scenes. Lol
Those moments were good too, but wow, you made Carol so damn naughty, I love it! And that part about being an evil witch, my goodness! That was hot! Perfect way to live.
With James being so tiny, and Carol wishing to restore him, I hope there is some error which leads to James being restored to around 3 inches tall and that’s his new fixed height. Imagine all the fun they could do without having to worry about James shrinking into nothing.
I also liked how Asmodea is trying to convince Mary into keeping James as a tiny pet. It seems like it’s working and Mary might actually consider it.
Lastly, that scene with Carol teasing Asmodea about shrinking her was kinda cool.
For some reason, I had this weird daydream about walking outside and meeting Carol, and then I spot a tiny bulge on her crotch and she tells me that James is shrunken and stuck down there and soon she will need a replacement since James is shrinking into nothing. I look at her in shock and excitement and in response, she smiles and touches my shoulder telling me that I am now cursed and will shrink to James’s height in 24 hours. She hands me her address and tells me to meet her there. I look down at the business card with her address on it, and then glance back down at her crotch. Noticing this, Carol places her hand over her crotch and presses inward, and the imprint of James disappears. Realizing what just happened, I look back at Carol, and she winks at me as she then begins walking away leaving me stunned.
Alright, enough fanfiction, I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Yeah Carol is getting naughtier as she gets more confidence, which is part of what Asmodea wanted in the first place, but now that's getting a little out of her control lol. Asmodea has been working on Mary and Carol for some time now, and she's brought both of them around to thinking and doing things they wouldn't have considered at the start of the story, the real question is will they see through it all before the end?
As for restoring James, I think you'll be happy with how it all ends for him.
[Report This]Date: July 18 2022 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 6
Unrequited love, fun thing to write about. It's a very fun setup you have there. Everyone is hiding something/attempting betrayal. Mary is going to burn the witch. Asmodea is trying to cause chaos. Carol is going to crush James. No one is in a genuine alliance. The only guy without an agenda is James, or at the very least, what he was hiding was his massive crush on Carol, he's not planning on killing or betraying anyone.
James and Carol's relationship is rather sweet. Painting the WH40k figurines was probably the best scene in there.
Mary, however, is best girl in here. Gotta love lawful good, because when they break the law for someone, you know the affection's special.
Author's Response:
There is a lot of betrayal going on in this one, but that's part of the fun. James and Carol have the most genuine relationship here, Asmodea is definitely coming closer to corrupting Carol, with Mary as a bonus.