Date: November 27 2023 6:08 AM Title: Prologue
Just started reading. Is this primarily socked content? No offense meant, just kinda kills it for me and it would be cool to know before diving deep. Thanks so much :)
Date: September 05 2022 9:50 AM Title: Prologue
This story is fantastic! Gentle extreme micro is so hard to find, plus you added the aware aspect which makes it all the better. I'd be amazed if little Lio explored Ava's hands, or helped take care of some long nails.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I try my best, and gentle micro stuff is something I personally love, so I just started scribbling.
I'm sure Lio will end up in Ava's hands (literally) at some point. Not a fan of long nails though, sorry.
Date: September 04 2022 5:08 PM Title: Prologue
Sorry for leaving so many constant reviews, but this story is really well written! I think your writing skills definitely got a chance to shine more with this most recent chapter. I've always found writing to be easier the more drastic the size difference is, you can be a lot more dynamic and descriptive and not worry about making them sound too big or intimidating. I'd be curious as to what your writing process is, I just kinda jot down a basic outline of the chapter, then I just revise and flesh it out until it sounds somewhat decent.
As for what happens next, that's ultimately up to you, but I'd love to see more stuff with Rachel, since we got a small taste of her at that massive size. I'm glad you said you're focusing the story mostly on her and Lio, the teasing and stuff with Ava is obviously really fun, but I think their sibling relationship is more unique than most stuff you see in giantess writings.
The introduction of the indestructible house helps a lot with transporting Lio and having something slightly bigger to hold, I liked all of the suggestions Ava made of what she could do with it. Maybe the next chapter could just be a body exploration with Ava, where she's laying on the couch to watch TV or something, puts Lio's house on her stomach, then he decides to come out and explore. And if he reaches a certain body part (like maybe one of those crevices I mentioned earlier) Rachel could say something like "While you're there, do ____ chore for me". But it's ultimately whatever you wanna do, I don't wanna hijack your story with constant suggestions.
All in all, great story, sorry for the long review ':)
Author's Response:
No worries, I quite like consistent reviews (if only to please my own ego a little). Thanks for the compliments, I also think I'll be able to show my "skills" more now that Lio has reached the sizes I'm used to dealing with. And you're right, a lot of it is due to the fact you can just go overboard with descriptions and it would be totally warranted. They are landscapes and can be described as such, especially once we get into proper body exploration.
As for my writing process: I get an idea, think it through a little bit... but mostly I just start writing and see where it goes from there. An example with the newest chapter: I only had the idea of Ava's eye being in front of his window, and it grew from there. Meanwhile, the (not-so-little) kiss was a spur of the moment idea, because it seemed fun. Also, who needs proofreading? xD
As for the future, I'll tell you the same thing I told the guy who's more into the Ava side of the story: there will be a balance. Maybe one will end up with more than the other, I don't know. But both ladies are equally important to Lio, and vice versa. I dunno where you got the idea where Rachel would be the focus, but if I said it, I didn't mean it like that.
We'll see what comes next, but, uh, Imma just note down your idea, for research purposes....
Date: September 03 2022 4:16 PM Title: Prologue
So excited for him to finally reach his final size, I can't wait to see what's in store next.
As for brainstorming chores that Lio could do, it's definitely hard to come up with stuff when he's that small, while also making sure it has fanservice. Ig some ideas that come to mind (besides the obvious feet) could be him cleaning their shoes, cleaning out their bellybuttons, cleaning out between their teeth, or maybe cleaning out their ears. Just a lot of cleaning of any small crevice that might be harder for a normal sized person to reach. It might also be interesting to have Lio get bored of staying at home, so he insists on going with Rachel to work or out with Ava, and that leads to shenanigans
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying it so much! And thanks for the consistent reviews!
Yeah, that balance was the thing I was struggling with. But I like... literally all of your ideas. He definitely would be most useful for cleaning between small cracks and crevices... and occasionally give him a Herculean task (like Rachel's massive size 12s) because... why not?
Lio definitely won't be staying home forever, at some point he'll start heading out with his 2 favourite ladies. But for now, they don't wanna overwhelm him.. Two godlike women are enough to get used to at once, hmm?~
Date: August 20 2022 4:36 AM Title: Prologue
Very excited to see how this story goes
Author's Response:
Honestly, so am I. I'm making this stuff up as I go along...
That's professional, right? Right?
*runs off into the sunset to hide his unprofessionalism*
Date: August 19 2022 9:11 PM Title: Prologue
Excellent story!
Cant wait to see where it goes!
Author's Response:
A familiar name involving extreme sizes, cool!
Glad you're enjoying it, maybe one day I'll actually reach the promised size difference ;P.
Date: August 09 2022 8:37 AM Title: Prologue
"The premise does not allow him to be smaller. The virus shrinks to 1/2000th, that's the rule."
I guess i was overly excited lol.
Nevertheless, it's said at one moment that his final size will be 0.85 mm.
For me that's still reeeeally small, just barely big enough be seen. Not to mention it is small enough to be "accidentally" snort up the girls' nose, trapped in their hair, their armpit, between their toes or just lost somewhere in the carpet. Can't wait to see more !
Author's Response:
Indeed, 1700mm/2000 = 0.85mm.
And you're totally right, it's barely big enough to be seen (of course that gets compensated a bit with the enhanced senses of those infected while having the other variant).
I will admit, your ideas intrigue me, all of them. We'll see which ones can work their way into the story.... and which other ones get added.
[Report This]Date: July 29 2022 6:50 AM Title: Prologue
Sorry I just realised that my review may have sounded rude
The first part is to show that the current size is already really small(since there were a lot of comments for smaller size) not to tell you off about how small the character is.
What I meant by the premise allows it would be, you could have made the size 1/100 or 1/5,000 but instead you made it 1/2,000 which might be due to you having scenarios in mind specifically for that size and making the character so although I would prefer a smaller size, making the character smaller or bigger may hurt the story instead.
Anyways, this is a great story and I am hoping to look forward to more
Author's Response:
It's alright.
The size was chosen as a balance between my love for truly extreme sizes and something still manageable and perceptible for a story focused on character interactions.
[Report This]Date: July 29 2022 1:29 AM Title: Prologue
At 1/2,000, even the foot of the smallest of girls would be massive already. At 20 cm, a foot is 400 meters long which would require about a minute to run accross.
Though I kind of would like if the main character was smaller and the premise kind of allows it, I understand that you have several ideas that you want to write for a character which is 1/2000th their size.
Author's Response:
Yes, I know the math, don't worry.
The premise does not allow him to be smaller. The virus shrinks to 1/2000th, that's the rule. If you want even bigger differences, I suggest you try the many Giga stories on this site.
Date: July 27 2022 3:28 AM Title: Prologue
>Hope we'll see him helplessly trapped between the girls's city sized feet or skyscraper sized toes
He would have to shrink much, much smaller than 2000th of his regular height to become small enough a girl's feet is city sized. With the provided estimates, their feet would at most be as long as the CN Tower is tall, which is pretty big when I started using visual models to imagine the sorts of extreme size difference scenarios await Lio if he decides to go bouldering atop his girlfriend's breast and nipple.
Though, even with such an extreme difference, some part of me feels a faint thrill imagining the possibility Lio might be making headlines and breaking world records when his variant of the virus is somewhat different and sends him spiralling downwards to genuine speck proportions the normal human eye can see before he becomes truly microscopic (the human eye can normally spot objects between 0.1~0.01 millimetres). It would be funny after all the planning and preparations, Lio finds himself bug-sized relative to the interior of his McMini-Mini-Mansion filled with the cutting edge in comforts and technology. With the advancements in miniaturisation tech, the fancier mansions could come equipped with something like a robotic personal servant to clean up after the tiny. Like robot angel catgirl maids (since they're small, their wings allow them to fly like a drone).
Author's Response:
Regular people will be huuuuge to him indeed.... Even the smallest parts of their bodies would outsize him. There's a reason I mentioned beauty marks and freckles when describing the ladies... he's gonna be outclassed even by those things.
Unfortunately, Lio will not be breaking headlines with a variant of the virus that makes him even smaller. Trust me, it's really really tempting, but that won't be happening. The reason the virus shrinks to 1/2000th was to explain why he got as tiny as he did. That being said, it's an amazing thought and it does float through my mind quite a bit..... Maybe some other time, or with dreams, I have yet to decide.... and wonder what would even happen in a dream sequence at such a size.... (Ideas always welcome ;P)
There will be no robotic personal servants and especially no robot angel catgirl maids. Sorry, but I'm just not doing that, ever. The most you're getting is like, a micro roomba.
Date: July 25 2022 5:09 AM Title: Prologue
I like how you're taking the time to introduce the characters and their relationships with each other, it'll make the giantess interactions all the more sweeter. As for the ideas you have, I wouldn't worry too much about how you're gonna connect them. You can always make each chapter a time skip and have them be smaller mini-adventures
Author's Response:
I'm a huge advocate for adding relationships and personalities into GTS stuff. I'm not great at it by any means, sticking to clichés, but it adds so much. A random hot giantess is cool. But a beautiful giantess whom you know and trust (or not, depending on the scenario) is so much more amazing. Depending on who the giantess is, it adds a layer of protection or safety or nervousness or dread or anxiety or anything else. With Rachel, it adds the layer of a protective big sister but with a playful side... siblings be siblings. With Ava, it's the layer of a best friend that adores the eventual speck... but was always the more adventurous of the pair. And, well, there's stuff you can do when you're best friends that you can't do with literal relatives.
...
Just gotta figure out what interactions to give to which. Ava has more possibilities than Rachel, but I'm sure there's stuff that can only be done with a gigantic sister.
Date: July 21 2022 4:32 PM Title: Prologue
After reading the first few chapters, I think the pacing of this story is really solid. I like that it's taking time to establish the other characters and his relationship with them, while also giving us hints about the future. The frequent updates are also really appreciated, it helps the readers not lose interest, especially when a story is slower paced
Author's Response:
Thanks man. Admittedly I'm not entirely sure where to take the plot next. The first two were easy cause it's just a lot of talking and meeting characters for the first time.
I've got overall things/scenes I might wanna do, but you gotta take the road to get there. And I'm not sure how to do that.
Frequent updates may slow down because of that.
[Report This]Date: July 20 2022 12:13 PM Title: Prologue
Hope to see some interactions with the sister's body part like foot massage, feeding etc at current size and maybe the same scene when he is at the smallest size.
Author's Response:
Well, we'll see, won't we?
Date: July 20 2022 11:45 AM Title: Prologue
I wouldn't be too hard on yourself for just using the easy tropes, the shrinking virus is one of my favorite plot setups simply because of how little setup you have to do, it's popular for a reason right?
Author's Response:
I suppose that's true. But that's also why you gotta make sure the actual story is interesting... there's countless better stories out there with the same overall premise.
Date: July 19 2022 10:58 PM Title: Prologue
Don’t be so displeased with your work. It’s only the first chapter, and aside from some minor issues, it serves as a good introduction. I’m looking forward to your next chapters :)
Author's Response:
Oh I will always be displeased with my work, just how I am. Hope you liked the 1st two "actual" chapters.
Date: July 19 2022 3:19 PM Title: Prologue
Nice setup, even if the premise isn't terribly unique, I think the thing that matters is what you do with the premise
Author's Response:
Thank you, hope you enjoy what I do with it in the future.
[Report This]Date: July 19 2022 1:40 PM Title: Prologue
I think the premise is acceptable, and I'm looking forward to how this will play out
Author's Response:
Thank you, hope you enjoy.