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Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2022 9:25 AM Title: Beginnings

I know how writing can be tricky and it is hard work. So, first I would like to say thanks for taking some time to share yours with us.

Wonderful start. You are not rushing introductions and managed to make me curious – about Lio and Rachel’s past, their current relationship, what they think and desire for life and each other, and how this Ava fits in their story.

And obviously I am like Lio: curious about how Rachel will look like when he is smaller than a ant on the floor... kkkkkkkkkkkk

I have a feeling this will be a good story.



Author's Response:

Thanks


I just figured I might as well share my boredom writings. If someone enjoys it, all the better.

The start is indeed slow, but that also makes it difficult. I've got ideas for down the line but I gotta get there first somehow.

And, well, I think most people are intrigued about how Rachel will appear at comparatively 3.7km tall ;P.

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