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Reviewer: GentleFan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2022 7:40 AM Title: Morning Visit From A Mountain

Glad we're fully into the micro interactions now. Great chapter! Looking forward to when he's more open to Ava's suggestions.



Author's Response:

Yeah, so am I, didn't think it would take this long to be honest. Thanks for the support, and keep following, we'll get to really fun stuff eventually!

Reviewer: unknown1 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2022 6:38 PM Title: Morning Visit From A Mountain

Her talking about baths really gets you thinking or hell somehow she takes him out and Jasmine finds him or her lover finds him....  SO MANY possibilities now! An uncrushable house... the things he can experience with or without the windows open too!


Author's Response:

And that's exactly what those lines were for: making the viewer's imagination run wild. There are a ridiculous amount of possibilities. And I hope to choose the right ones lmao. Or, well, the enjoyable ones regardless of whethwr they're "right".

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2022 4:42 PM Title: Morning Visit From A Mountain

So excited he's at this size! I think his different relationship dynamics with Rachel and Ava make for an amazing story and provide different takes on gentle and playful/teasing themes. On that point there are extremely few mega giantess gentle stories, so I think this has a great niche!  I am glad Lio is already beginning to see Ava more as a mountain sized girlfriend.  I hope that while Lio already explored Rachel's feet that Ava does the same but more playful where her soles look like huge landscapes. I'd love to see a scenario like Lio is in a micro boat in the  "sea" of a bath with Ava as she plays with him like a bath toy. Not sure if there are micro cruise ships for micro vacations but would love Lio to be on a cruise ship with thousands of other micros being played with by a mountainous Ava and her bare feet. I hope both Rachel and especially Ava start to think of themselves more as mega giantesses with Lio than think of Lio as micro...that they are the ones actually titanic in size saying things like "my toes are like buildings to you now". Would be an interesting mental change to follow as a sub plot. Most of all I love the constant discussion from both Lio and the giantesses about how huge they are now and comparing tiny parts of their bodies to him and his house. Great work and can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thanks! My main goal was to have a classic shrinking story, but with the kind of size difference I personally prefer (the border of microscopic). I'm glad you're enjoying it so far, and hope it inspires people to maybe one day also just start writing and sharing their work.

Do not worry, body exploration is guaranteed to happen down the line, though I cannot yet say how it will go. The idea of Lio on a micro boat while in a bath or pool is definitely one I'm taking into consideration; don't worry. But sadly, the idea of micro cruise ships for thousands of them to go on vacation doesn't quite fit in this world.Though I will admit the idea is quite enticing. 

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2022 12:29 PM Title: Morning Visit From A Mountain

Personally, Id like to see more Ava chapters but that goes without saying lol. I liked how Lio started picking up on Avas hints in this one after being clueless for a decade. I just want to see their relationship advance from being best friends towards being lovers. I think it would be interesting to see how they make it work with the size difference. We know she can kiss his house but can she be that gentle with him in bed. I know Im gonna be getting ahead of myself with this question but would a micro be able to impregnate a normal woman? I feel like that would be a pretty good endgame revelation.

All in all, I cant wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I understand you're an Ava fan, but unfortunately the story isn't just about her. It tends to alternate, with exceptions due to "sudden" events (Jasmine showing up, Lio's flash-shrink). They will definitely start doing more and more stuff. And I think it's pretty clear they will eventually get there. I'm enjoying the journey and slowly easing into it. We'll see how lewd stuff is handled at some point, probably.

But I am going to stop you right there and say there is no way for a Micro to impregnate a regular sized woman. It's impossible and will never happen. If only because it implies children-involved scenarios in hypothetical sequels that I refuse to do.

So no, Ava will not get pregnant. And neither will Rachel by some other hypothetical guy, or anyone for that matter. It would be best to get those ideas out of your head immediately, because you will be disappointed.

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