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Reviewer: jx59syun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2023 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 18

Absolutely love the overly stern, domineering mother/guardian/teacher all in one vibe from Evangeline. This scene in particular is just so evocative:

“I… but she… she can´t take my car…” He asserted.

“Well, now she can. I believe she said you should be taller than 4´8”, now… I don’t think your 4´7” height is above that range.” 4´7”? He was down to 4´7”?

He felt overwhelmed. He nearly stumbled. This couldn´t be happening. Just yesterday he was above 5´, and now, now he´s half way down to 4´.

“Larry, I know this is hard. You were doing so good. Why can´t you accept the fact that people are only trying to help you. Even I came to advice you that you should listen to her. But you refused to. Now, there´s no way you can´t. Next time you see her, you´ll have to give her your keys.”

The entire menagerie of women are awesome, each one brings a different flavor. Hope that we see more of all of them and they just keep casting larger and larger shadows.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I´m glad you liked this chapter! And Evangeline, glad she´s quite a lovely character.

I´m glad this scene gave so much thrill to the chapter too. And as you say, each woman on the story is different and brings a little more to the story.

And trust me, there will be plenty more ;D

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2023 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 15

Wow, great chapter! 

I really like Violet’s character now. She has evolved into the supportive, but flirty type of woman that I think every guy dreams of having. I knew she was hot, but now I’m liking her more and more. 

Also, I love how Evangeline just is having fun now and seems to make fun of Larry every chance she gets. Part of me wonders if she gets turned on watching these women take advantage of Larry. 

Well, I can’t wait for the next chapter! 

Author's Response:

Awesome! Glad you like Violet´s evolution <3

And... there´s something special in store for Evangeline... in time, you´ll see ;)

Reviewer: eve Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2023 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 1


A virus make mature Moms and Milfs so huge and thick and sexy.

Every family will have 12ft tall sexy mother as their queen.

Thank you

Reviewer: eve Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2023 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 1


I wish we have more growth for Grace, Milf should grow much bigger and hotter than girls.

Author's Response:

A bunch of giant, mature women, sounds nice...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2023 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 10

I like Nellie. You could tell she wants something from him. She makes eye contact with a guy and decides to visit his house. Rarely is someone that forward unless they have extra motivation. 

Kinda cool how Grace is part of this situation too. This dinner is going to be fun. I could imagine the 3 them at a dinner table. Grace near Larry while Nellie is sitting facing him. During dinner, she could extend those long legs of hers and place them on his lap for some fun. Lol. It would be fun to see him concentrate then. 

Good chapter and I can’t wait for the next one! 

Author's Response:

Nellie is quite motivated :) And Grace is just a growing menace, XD. Thanks for the comment, hope you like the new chapter :D

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2023 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 8

Holy Violet! 

I did not expect this from her! What a plot twist! And I love it! 

I hope she chooses the naughty path! It was so fun watching her take control and I the best part is that he is still shrinking so it’s going to be even better! 

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Naughty Violet's fun, isn't she?

I promise there will be more if it as the story goes :D

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2022 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 7

I like this interaction with Violet. I think he expects her to dislike him, but I think she is actually appreciating his short height. 

The message at the end sounds like a “if you need help reaching stuff on the top shelf” type of help. I don’t think it’s the suggestive kind of help that his former assistant had. Lol

I like the idea that he has so many tasks to do for each day. Kinda hot to think about have a sexy taller woman give you a lists of things to do and then there’s a message with a wink. Haha!

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it! Violet´s an enigma, but she will be soon explained later on ;D

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2022 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 5

Great chapter! 
I thought it was great to see Evangeline help him out by explaining the situation to his boss. 
Also, the assistant swap is some great drama stuff. Most giantess stories wouldn’t even have some secondary plot such as this, so I found it very entertaining. 
The conversation with Lawrence and Lexie was funny. I like how they try to roleplay their way into sex. It seems like they do this often, so I’m guessing the roleplay part is also fun to do. Otherwise, they would’ve just said. “Your place, let’s fuck”. Or something forward lol. 
Can’t wait for the next time Lawrence shrinks and I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you, I´m happy to hear that the assistant part´s well received :D

haha, and yes, Lexie and Larry will get their time together... soon. Hope you like the chapter I´ve just posted.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2022 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 3

Wow! So much happened this chapter! 

First off, I like how Tina was the one to invite him to her place. Some ideas began floating around for me wondering, “what if Tina does some harassment to Larry” or something. Would Evangeline let it happen, would she interfere. The fact that Tina took the lead for a bit made me wonder that. 

Just like Larry, I also wondered if any of the sex would be forbidden for Evangeline. Such as maybe she wanted Larry to go down on Tina and worship her before engaging in intercourse. It’s cool to see how she let that sex just play out and no do anything. Also, it was cool to see Tina and Larry both orgasm. 

Good idea with the leaving Tina part. She asked Larry to stay and he is leaving her much to Evangeline’s disapproval. I also like the “1 inch for every warning” type rule. 

When Evangeline said “see you in the morning” I thought Larry might drive off to find another woman to fuck. Lol. Maybe I got carried away with my thoughts, haha! 

Interesting to see Larry deal with his neighbor. I can’t believe she used the porno line. I wonder if Evangeline even picked up on that. Maybe she actually thought the neighbor wanted some house help. Lol. 

Ah meetings. I wonder how many coworkers he has that are women. I could imagine that since he is the boss, that he hired only hot women and now he’s entering a room full of them ready to tower over him. Could be really exciting soon. 

Well, I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you TomSpeedy, I´m glad you liked the chapter, and also the "1 inch" rule. I´m constantly thinking on things like that, to give some more to the plot.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2022 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 2

I’m glad that Larry is shrinking more this chapter. Interesting to see him as tall as his date. 

The part about touching her butt in public was the reason for shrinking seems odd to me since I see it often in real life, even among couples that both agree to it. If they were in a public park or on a bus, I think that would be more inappropriate. But in a club, there’s all sorts of “indecent” actions which I’ve understood to be sort of accepted in such a setting. 

Although for this case, Tina “trembled” a bit. When I read that, I thought she was about to orgasm or something from that kind of tremble. I guess “winced” would’ve been a better word to show that she was uncomfortable with the touching to her butt. 

Also, you could argue that he was simply being forward and if Tina accepted his advances, it would’ve been ok. Since she didn’t like it, then Larry knows not to do it again. If he touched her butt immediately after, ignoring her discomfort, then I think it would make more sense to shrink him. 

Idk, I’m just used most adult clubs to be super crowded and everyone is touching and groping each other to the point that most people dancing are simply used to it. 

Besides that, I really liked seeing Larry still try to fight Evangeline. Their banter is great and I’m excited to see her become enraged and take off even more inches. 

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback TomSpeedy :D

Sorry if the butt part felt kind of... forced, but I thought since she was an angel, who´s supposed to be pure and good-willed, then she´ll have a different perception of what´s allowed and what´s not, talking about public touching. Still, I think I was just looking for an excuse to take an inch away LOL.

Hope you like the new chapter as well

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2022 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

Whoa! This story sounds awesome! 

The best part is easily the dialogue. The conversation between the Angel and Larry is so fun to watch. I can’t wait for Larry to shrink even smaller. 

One thing I wonder is that could other people see the Angel or only Larry? If she’s invisible, it could be funny to have other people see Larry talk to himself. 

So far, I like this start and I can’t wait for the next chapter! 

Author's Response:

Thanks. And yeah, if people see him talking to no one, haha, it would be quite embarassing... for him.

The dialogs are quite something for this story. The interactions between him and the angel. I'll try my best to make them nice and funny. Hopefully I can do so in the upcoming chapters.

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 30 2022 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice start. There are a few pronoun errors, but nothing that distracts from the story.  Great concept, will be interesting where this story goes.

Author's Response:

Thank you. I'll work on it, but I'm glad it's something minimal. I'm glad you liked the concept. It was an idea that grew on my mind thru some time and now, it's about to become a nice story. Hope you like where I take it :D

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