Date: July 07 2023 2:33 PM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
How the hell did this story managed to slip past me?
Its awesome!
Author's Response:
Happy to know that you like the story! 😊. I have a lot of exciting chapters planned further down the road.
[Report This]Date: June 04 2023 5:16 AM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
Hello LittleBigPlanet!
I've been following your story since the first chapter has been released and I gotta admit, this is THE story that keeps me coming back to this site. You inspired me to create this account, to write my own stories! (fun fact I had an account before but I deleted it 'cuz i was kinda ashamed of my fetish :/) Keep up the good work and good luck to you academically!
p.s. like what the previous reviewer said, more Asian Giantess content could be cool. I think you already have a potential candidate in the form of Max's classmate, Mei Lin Zhang! Would love to see her interact with some ants or, Max himself!
Author's Response:
Thank you for saying that this is one of your favourite stories on the site! I have a lot planned so you will be coming back to the site a lot more often 😅.
I don't think having an interest in macro content is anything to be ashamed of. That's kind of why I have an anonymous username anyway. I kind of need more than anyone since my real name no one else quite has 😋. No family or friends knows about my secret macro fantasies And I think you should embrace and express yourself.
Thank you very much for wishing me luck for the exam period. I have now finished most of my exams I have 2 more next week. Chapter 6 is ready to go I just need to proofread it so I am estimating it will be out by June 25th or 26th 🙏 💪
Date: May 21 2023 12:30 PM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
Hope to see asap the new chapter, I'd like to see an Asian giantess character... Well, you have already written all the plot, but who knows
Author's Response:
Chapter 6 is actually completed now! 😊 18854 words. I just need to proofread it before I submit it which will be in Early-mid June, just after the exam period is over.
Divya Bandaranayake is the main Asian giantess I introduced in Chapter 3 An Unexpected Visitor. However, I do plan to create more characters so if you want an Asian giantess with an ethnicity from a specific part of Asia feel free to email me. 🙂
Date: April 19 2023 12:56 PM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
Any news about the sixth chapter?
Author's Response:
So I am around 75% of the way through the chapter and it is around 15000 words so it will probably be 20000 words again. The reason why it is taking so long is because I keep having to put it on hold from time to time to prioritize school work.
The good news is that there is a bit of break in work coming up so I can finish it, proofread it then and get it out by next month. 🙂
Date: April 14 2023 6:16 AM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
I've only read the prologue so far. You described the setting well, and I love the ant army and find it all very funny :)
Author's Response:
Let me know when you get to Chapter 3: An Unexpected Visitor and Chapter 4: Prisoner of the Ant People because that's when it starts getting really interesting 😊
Date: February 28 2023 6:36 PM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
Can't wait to read another chapter.
Author's Response:
Well, the good news is that I have started on Chapter 6 of Antopia and am about 1/3 through it.
The bad news is that uni semester has started so it is going to be a little while
[Report This]Date: January 29 2023 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 4: Prisoner of the Ant People
Another amazing chapter filled with detail and character developement. From what I can tell it seems the ants have learned by observing humans and surpassed them already? Probably courtesy of Dr. Thorax genius. Will he be able to produce a growth formula? My gut says no: one because he will find out it’s easier to shrink but hard to reverse without killing the subject, two because Antopia has no need for such a disruptive technology anyway. Plus I want Max to stay ant-sized forever LOL
With development, comes change. The fact that govenment officials are suggesting to use Max as leverage points to opposing views inside Antopia. Some are like Sting and see Lucy as nothing but a danger. Others see in her a opportunity to overthrow the current structure of power. Hell, if we are talking about mimicking humans, at this point some ants might have built some crazy cult around her.
After this trials Max understands he can never let Sting capture Lucy, but call me crazy, I can see the ant general warming up to Max, coming to dote on him like a grandson. The great dillema if this happens is obvious, but again, the story is playing with perspectives – we have opposing view inside Antopia as well as in each character. Who is right? I don’t think that is the main issue when feelings and desires are at play and there is no need for a clear answer also. Divya and Lucy are friends and right in the middle of the struggle we have Max and Penelope.
I can totally understand Max frustration with Penelope, she seems to treat him less like a brother and more like a pet project to make her mother proud. The irony is that, if Max was at his normal size, what would this kind and naive princess be to him? Those two have a lot to learn with each other.
The queen… well, I agree with Max, Dakota is a badass and I really liked her, but. as any ruler, she is prone to manipulation and the fact that Dr. Thorax shrunk the wrong person (was it really by accident?) puts her in a thogh spot. She can’t just send Max back, she can’t punish him for what others did and (here is another irony), he more time she keeps Max, the more reasons she will give for Lucy to hate Antopia even more.
There is another issue. It’s a guess and I am repeating myself, but that’s the whole point of my theory: unless it’s possible to mass produce darts to shrink the entire human race, Max value as a hostage is unfathomable – the key to keep the entire family of giants roaming her land at bay instead of just punishing one.
Talking about the Firewalls… It’s sad nobody noticed Max is missing yet, but is just a question of time now and it will be another shake to weight on Lucy’s shoulders ot top of what happened to Divya. I think some high-rank ants understand that and what it means – a chance to communicate.
I love the way you are keeping us updated on what is happening on both sides – Antopia and the Firewall residence – and I just can’t wait for the next chapters. Thank you THANK YOU for all the effort!
PS.: third time I am changing my comment. This chapter really gave me a lot to think :D
Author's Response:
I honestly think you must be one of the most in-depth analytical reviewers on this site! Wish you could have helped me with my school TEEL analytical essays back when I was in high school around 4 years ago...
You are absolutely spot on. It is much harder to grow a human back than it is to shrink him so Max will be stuck for a while let's just say even if Dr Thorax wanted to help him.....
All the government ministers are essential based on different sections of parliament in the real human world so I tried my best to base the society of Antopia on that with a little bit of the Roman Empire thrown in as well.
Many different ants have their own views of Lucy. Most of them hate her but some see this to use it to their advantage to fulfil their own agendas .....
Let's just say a lot of characters will be undergoing character development including General Sting.....
Later on, we going to find out why princess Penelope is so sympathetic and optimistic about humans.......
Since Max was hard to punish since he wasn't doing any of the actual genocide I tried to portray the most accurate and realistic punishments and convictions based on his actions. So glad you liked the trial!
Yeah, those shrinking darts are a manufacturing nightmare so it will be literally impossible to shrink 7 billion humans. It would take millions of years...
Let's just say Max is leverage at this point......
The irony is that had Rebecca refused to listen to her husband's rant on porn and barged into the room they would have discovered the son was missing sooner. Let's just say it has been delayed a little bit...
You have to be my favourite reviewer on the site...😊
[Report This]Date: January 29 2023 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 4: Prisoner of the Ant People
This chapter is so good!
Before the positives, there is one thing I didn't like and that's the excessive swearing. I don't have any problems with swearing, but almost every character uses it so constantly that it makes it feel like they speak the same way, which makes the dialogue sound a bit artificial.
It's justifiable since this is a tense situation and everyone there is angry, but it made the dialogue a bit tiresome to read, for me at least.
The rest is great!
Seeing the ant universe getting expanded is always a treat, some of the interactions are pretty funny (mainly with Max and Sting), and all the Lucy scenes are excellent!
My favorite is probably the painted nails story, with the magnifying glass scene being the second.
And I'm very interested to see how these characters develop and evolve through the story, especially the main three Max, Penelope, and Sting, I feel like they will change a lot, both themselves and how they interact with each other.
Also, one of the ants said "AMONG US" at one point which was epic.
Author's Response:
Looking back I kinda agree with you that, especially in the earlier chapters the word fucking was used way too often. I guess I did because I felt the story hadn't had much action yet but it still needed to earn that R (Ma15+) rating. Going forward I will try to use the swearing when it flows better in the story.
Glad you like the interactions between our three main protagonists.
The magnifying glass scene was actually heavily inspired by the animated movie Antz. The painted nails were a creative touch as well in terms of how they can be used as a powerful weapon for the ants so I am so glad you enjoyed both scenes!
Our three main protagonists (apart from Lucy and Divya) will be undergoing a lot of character development in the story
The ant shouting AMONG US was a foreshadowing clue. I wonder if they have traitors among them? And who could they be? 🤔
Date: January 28 2023 6:36 PM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
Your work does not go unnoticed great one. We all appreciate the writing.
ps I love love to see another Lucy rampage or the dangerous footstool in the backyard. Maybe some inshoe but still I love the work and keep up the good work
Author's Response:
Lucy's dog Footstool is actually going to have a major role in one of the chapters further down the story and a couple of others as well
Lucy is going to launch several attacks on Antopia so there will be no shortage of rampages
Thanks for saying that my effort in my writing does not go unnoticed!
[Report This]Date: January 26 2023 6:56 PM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
Absolutely incredible and amazing story! Your writing is fantastic, the plot is great, and basically just about everything is perfect! One of the best stories I’ve ever read and I really hope there’s more!
Also, hope that there’s some more butt action in the future. That scene with Jack almost getting crushed is hot.
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
I tend to keep people interested in both the plot and the erotic elements. So glad that you have enjoyed the plotline of the story so far and believe me when I say it's going to get a whole lot more interesting very soon!
Nice to know that you enjoyed Divya almost flattening criminal scumbag Jack with her bum. I thinking of including more explicit butt action with older female characters later in the story
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: January 26 2023 5:46 PM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
Love this story, anything can hapoen
Hope to read more chapters asap. Definitely one of the best stories of the past 3 years
Author's Response:
Well I have an outline of several more chapters planned so you going to be doing a lot more reading, lol 😂
[Report This]Date: January 12 2023 1:16 AM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
This is a wonderful beginning to hopefully a long journey. Feel like it's just taking off. Can't wait for more ant genocide. Maybe a mother daughter dual destruction. Along with of course unaware peril
Author's Response:
Oh, I have already planned an outline for the next 10 chapters so believe me when I say it's going to be a long journey 😃
The ants are going to be killed in a lot of creative ways throughout the course of this story including lots of unaware scenarios 😁
Also Lucy's mother Rebecca is going to have a bigger role later on in the story (light spoiler)
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: January 10 2023 2:50 AM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
Chapter 4🥳🥳🥳. We are blessed with another chapter
Author's Response:
Yep, I will probably have chapter 5 posted next week 😃
Also, an update on Lucy, she is a teenager, 11 to 12 years old for the majority of the story
[Report This]Date: January 01 2023 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 3: An Unexpected Visitor
You deserve all the praise for this story. So far you’ve used writing to depict a story about different perspectives, showcasing complex themes like violence, love and sex, negligence, religion and speciesism with rich details, wraping everything within the pains and tragedies of your main characters. As far as I can tell, we have a splendid coming of age story in the making – with size and speciesism being central components to move the narrative.
Marvelous. I don’t know how to emphasize more the quality of your writing. And for the record: I knew it! I had a felling at least one of my favorite stories would be updated until New Year’s eve! The wait paid off. Thank you! Thank you!
About Divya, she played perfectly what I would expect from a best friend, offering layers to Lucy’s character and actions along the way. Even better: she went beyond my expectations and introduced Budhist concepts into the story. Could this be an explanation for the existence of Antopia? If yes… that 99.99%… is our boy Max already with a death flag on his head?
Man, now that Ithink about it, we don’t really know if its possible to bring Max
back to his original size.
I also want to talk about Max and where him meeting with Penelope might lead. but I also want to wait and see how they interact moving forward after our hero recovers from all the shock and violence.
Again, thanks for sharing. Wish you a Happy New Year! May 2023 be full of peace and inspiration for all of us.
Author's Response:
Divya is actually loosely based on a girl I know in real life so I am so glad you liked her character 😇
This story is going to have a lot more complex mature and political themes introduced to elaborate on a lot of characters' actions and motivations so I am very glad you enjoyed those concepts as well. Divya being a devoted Buddhist girl was used to explain the vast majority of her caring character towards insects but I plan to introduce some more religious themes and concepts as well later on in the story.
I also created Divya's character to be the polar opposite of Lucy to serve sort as a moral consciousness for Lucy to reflect on her own actions later on in the story
I have the next 4 to 5 chapters already have an outline planned out so you have a lot to look forward to
Bit of a spoiler alert you are going to find out a lot more about Princess Penelope soon.
Wishing you a happy new year too! I love your in-depth analysis reviews 😀
[Report This]Date: December 31 2022 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 3: An Unexpected Visitor
That was another really good chapter. I love the contrast between Divya and Lucy and also once again your descriptions. The way you describe those huge and immense sizes is so great. Also I love sock and shoe content so that helped too haha. Looking forward for more :D
Author's Response:
Divya's character is designed to be the polar opposite of Lucy's cruelty towards bugs so you can think of her kind of Lucy's consciousness to reflect on her own actions. I also created Divya because I felt there were too many stories focussing on giantess cruelty and not enough of other interactions so Divya's interactions are the perfect example of gentle interactions, especially the feeding ants the Oreo crumbs scenes.
That being said I have already planned an outline for the next 4 to 5 chapters so you have a lot to look forward to 😎
[Report This]Date: November 18 2022 3:31 AM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
You might be one of the best writers on here, second... Those aphids... Who hurt you?
Author's Response:
Yeah I tend to give it a 110% for my writing before publishing to the public 🙂
The aphids were actually an ironic symbol of a mother aphid and her children being slaughtered by another mother of 2 children. I deliberately decided to depict one mother killing another mother to get an interesting reaction from audiences.
Stick around because this story is far from over 😉
Date: November 07 2022 3:24 PM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
IF the ants can shrink people, why don't they just shrink Lucy and punish her? What kind of relationships will the boy have with the ants?
Author's Response:
All your questions mate are literally going to be answered in the next chapter 🙂
[Report This]Date: November 06 2022 7:10 PM Title: Prologue: The Little Monster
Ignore the user below, not sure what his problem is. Great story so far, very similar to Ant Bully in a few ways and I cant wait to see where you'll take the story next!
Author's Response:
Yep that movie is where I am drawing the majority of the inspiration for this story 🙂
Yeah, fuck that guy he is clearly a troll account
[Report This]Date: November 06 2022 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning-4 Years Later
I can’t describe my happiness when the first thing I saw today was an update on this story. I was worried you had given up and now… now I am anxious for the next chapter!
You have a very strong writing, describing the characters life, their moods, actions and their surroundings, all that enhances the experience and antecipation for what is to come – and I very much share Lucy’s disdain for fractions and math in general.
It’s also worth noting you don’t dismiss the parents figure in the story dynamics. With their parents absent, Max has to take responsibility and be the authority figure for his little sister, but he is also her brother and a teen.
Remember my last comment on Max behaviour? On how it striked how he didn’t act with glee when seeing Lucy get scollded and hurt ? He is someone who has had to grown too fast for Lucy’s sake too. I might be reading too much into it, but I think that’s why we see Max dismissing Lucy as someone who doesn't “know when to grow up”, while she herself tries to imitate his mannerisms.
Lucy is clearly going through puberty and, unconsciously, looks up to Max. Lets hope she also looks down. For his sake.
Thanks for writing and sharing with us.
Author's Response:
Nah, don't worry I hate to leave things unfinished, I just caught so caught up in engineering assignments that I had barely had anytime to update. But now that its summer holidays I will have a lot more time to write 😄
Yeah I felt the parents need a slightly bigger a role as well which I was why I decided to give the mum a bigger part in this chapter.
Yeah I made Lucy a tween on the verge of becoming a teenager because I felt that was a pivotal age where behaviour and interactions are going to a lot more interesting.
Yeah things are going to get a lot more chaotic for poor Max very soon... 😂
[Report This]Date: November 06 2022 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning-4 Years Later
Yes !!! I want to be honest,I thought the story was dead but I am so glad it isnt and that many more updates will come soon. Another great chapter. Its a really good setup for whats to come and I am really excited to see how she will dominate the ants. Also, the fact that she has a dog could open even more options for the story. I dont know if you have anything planned with that but I would love to see the dog as a massive threat too. Again , 10/10 !! Great work
Author's Response:
Nah, don't worry I hate to leave things unfinished, I just caught so caught up in engineering assignments that I had barely had anytime to update. But now that its summer holidays I will have a lot more time to write 😄
Yeah Lucy's dog we are also going to see some giant interactions later on in the story as well and I love to experiment so that will be very interesting as well