[Report This]Date: August 20 2022 1:43 PM Title: Coffee Flavored (Soft Vore, F/m)
"By the way, I don't even know if you read those responses, but I feel like it's right writing them anyway. " - I do read your responses. ^^
"Also, the first story ended with the main character being digested (and dead), so I'm not sure how would that continue LOL." Sure Tom is dead, but his devourer Svetlana isn't. Unless she by now shrunk and was eaten too.
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"[...], but natural reasons like genetic or viral shrinking could happen to almost anyone at any given time." - I just realized: Imagine a woman shrinking by genetic predeposition whilst being heavily pregnant... I guess Caeserean Section is no longer the bloodiest way to enter this world...
"Furthermore, if
already bothering making edible clothes, why not make them flavored?" -
Sure, why not as long as the flavor in question isn't "veggie" because
that would make no sense whatsoever. I have read this exact thing (with
tinies considered 'veggie' because they aren't animal meat) before
though. I think it was in a Story of VortexFoodsTM, but don't quote me
on that.
"I bet you would taste great in a BLTT (bacon, lettuce, Tiny, tomato) sandwich!" - It would've been amazing if I read this yesterday, as I had a BLT for Brunch.
"It is you! What are the coincidences?" - Spelling Mistake And I think "What are the odds?" would sound more natural.
"Oh no! Please no!"
"The stomach acids felt tingling on my skin,[...]"
I expected the teacher to pick our protagonist up and just dump him in her coffee on the side, so the whole system concerning at-school shrinking surprised me, but given schools tend to overcomplicate anything on the other hand...
He surely had the worst luck though. Shrinking in the class of a teacher he hates, then narrowly getting away from her by a technicality... Only to end up with (and in) her anyway after all is said and done.Author's Response:
Thank you Avid Reader, I'm glad you enjoyed that too!
- Pregnant shrunken woman- I actually have one story in this collection with a pregnant shrunken woman. I don't remember if I made her shrink before or after getting pregnant, but it's a really cruel story with multiple stuff in it. If you're interested, it is the "Tinies Caviar" one.
- Usually I like to think of tinies as the meat, and have them eaten with veggies. However, I do like to use different approaches in different stories, sometimes having them eaten with meat, sometimes considered as a live animal food (won't be eaten by vegans), and sometimes as legitimate live food (would be eaten by vegans). So it depends on what I felt like writing.
- "What are the coincidences?" LOL I have this problem, even in my own language when I speak. Sometimes there are two ways to say the same thing (or two words even), and my brain haven't decided which one he wants to use, and I end up sayin half and half. In this case I probably mixed up "what are the chances/odds" and "what a coincidence" . This problem gets even worse when I'm speaking, trying to decide between "excellent" and "awesome" and what goes out of my mouth is "awe-xcellent".
- Well, I'm against writing about underage characters if any sex is involved. Tbh, I try to avoid writing about them even when it's just fetish without describing sex or any sexual stuff. However, I had a HUGE fantasy back when I was in school myself, to be (shrunk and) eaten by my teachers. So I try to be very careful when writing about this.
The idea of a teacher dumping him in her coffee on the side is awesome too, but here I tried to go with something a bit new.
- Yes, I like to use cruel narratives a lot, trying to play with giving a false sense of hope, or trying to mislead the reader at first to intensify the evilness of the cruel twist at the end.
On personal note- I like you ideas and thoughts on this world and fantasy, it's always a pleasure to talk to other people about this things, hear new ideas.
By the way- From time to time I try to read again on of my stories, finding out spelling and grammar mistakes and fix them (if I even find them lol). I haven't got to all of them, so some might have more mistakes than others. Apologies.