[Report This]Date: August 18 2022 3:16 PM Title: Ethnic Food 2 (Hard Vore, F/f)
"[...]Are you going to be tiny? Oh if you shrink can I eat you? Please! I really want to swallow you!" " - Emily's initial reaction is a little disturbing.
"After a couple of days, they got used to it." - Spelling Mistakes
"But don't worry, we have Iron Dome system, it shoots down the rockets from the sky." - So Tamara and Emily are in Israel (alias Palestine). So that's why you didn't want to claim out say it.
"But here, even if Emily would have kept her there was still a high chance she would have been confiscated at the airport." - That actually wouldn't be a bad premise either. -> "You cannot take a live tiny onto a Plane. Eat it now, or we will dispose of it." Analog to how bigger containers of let's say Shampoo is handled now.
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I am not necessarily disappointed but surprised. Given this chapter is called "Ethnic Food 2" I expected a direct sequel. Not what it is, yes. But still a good one.
Author's Response:
Hey there! Thanks again for your feedback, I always appreciate it.
By the way, I don't even know if you read those responses, but I feel like it's right writing them anyway.
- Emily's reaction should be kind of disturbing I guess. The general narrative I like to use is cruel, so it's natural when some of the things are a bit disturbing. That being said, it's sometimes very hard to write dialogue with the correct intended tone, it depends a lot on the association that went through the readers mind. In that specific sentence, I meant cynically playful. Some people aren't used to sarcasm so much.
- Misspells - Yes, I'm sorry. I wrote this quit recently, and recently my keyboard is messing up with me. I use MS Word to write, and the spelling correction there isn't 100% mistake proof.
- Yes, I clearly meant Israel (Not Palestine). I would have strictly written "Israel", but I just know some people out there, specially with Arab or Muslim origins, might rule it out and decide they hate the story on the spot. I wanted to make it not so clear at first, and only hinting it so it will be easier for politically sensitive people to put it aside and just enjoy the vore story. If you wish to talk about it more, feel free to send me an Email or we can chat in discord :)
- Surely some skilled people can find a way to smuggle a Tiny on board an airplane. The point here was to briefly tie that end and give an excuse to why Tamara had to be abandoned to her doom. However, it would be a nice concept to see someone trying to smuggle her shrunken friend to a plane, but she end up having to eat him herself or hand him over to be processed and sold on a local food place.
- About the name- Well, it started in my head as a very similar Idea to the first "Ethnic Food". I thought of calling it "Another Ethnic food" or something, but went with #2. Also, the first story ended with the main character being digested (and dead), so I'm not sure how would that continue LOL.
I'm glad you find this one to your liking (at least at some level), and I hope you'll find some of the other ones to your liking too. My greatest hope is to introduce a new concept for someone who haven't thought about it that way before, and will end up liking it.