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Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2022 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 8

A fun story and fun concept.  While the abrupt ending was a sad surprise, I like to imagine the story is not over yet.

Maybe those experimental devices the humans used left larger "holes" in the magic barrier between worlds and that causes more humans to appear in the giant world.  The "holes" keep growing until they are big enough for giantesses to squeeze through into human world.  Stuff happens, Ada goes to human world to see if she can find Ian and protect him from the other giantesses, they reunite, etc.  Meanwhile, human world is beset by a plague of horny, playful giantesses.

Like your beanstalk story, I'm left wanting more.

Reviewer: gaddlik Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05 2022 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

To be honest, one of the first times I’ve been very disappointed by a story.


This was the best new story and the one I had been looking forward to the most in so long. 

After Ada believed her mom, I thought we’d see more. 

After they had to pretend in front of the mom, I thought we’d see more.

After the soldiers were picked up by the other family, I thought we’d see more.

The way it was gearing up it felt like the rescue mission would fail with them stolen or dead, and you’d made yourself a lot of opportunities for easy content on “down weeks”.


But then, suddenly it ended without any warning. 


I hope you reconsider an alternate ending and continue with this one, because it really was the best while it was going.



Author's Response:

Well, sorry to have disappointed you. Again, I refer you to my answer to the previous review: I have real trouble writing good smut scenes and I find myself repeating the same stuff over and over again. This is exhausting. If you watch carefully there is a pattern to my stories: The tension builds up, expectations are risen, everything is beautifully described but when it's time to reach the peak with a sex scene...then boom nothing happens, everything is left suspended. Don't know how to deal with that...

By the way, if you want good giantess futa/dominant content I refer you to Mr Z's work on writing.com. As for this story, I don't see it having an alternate ending.

Thank you for the honest feedback.

Reviewer: Dibus Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 05 2022 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 8

good story, hope for a sequel



Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you liked it! As for a sequel, we'll see about that...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 05 2022 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 8

After reading your Jack and the beanstalk story, this felt very short in comparison. I thought the story was just getting started. Feels like it just suddenly ended. 

I was expecting more plot with Ada, Ian and Samantha, but these latest chapters was mostly about the rescue. I guess I thought the soldiers would fail their mission since I assumed the story was still early.

Also, I agree with the previous review. You left us on a great cliffhanger with those girls taking the soldiers to their mom. Certainly a fun possibility there. 

Well, I suppose there must be a reason for the sudden ending of this story. I’m not sure what but it felt like you wanted to end it all at once. 

Either way, I’m excited for your next story! 



Author's Response:

 Yeah, you're right. As I read the whole story from the beginning the last chapter seemed to be a bit in a rush. Sorry about that... I don't know but I felt myself repeating things over and over again, that's why I decided end this. I didn't want this to be boring, spamming the same themes repeatedly... As a non native english speaker I find it very difficult to provide cool smut scenes (vocabulary is too limited) so, all I do, is describe the giantesses, have them meet the men but when it's time for the hotter stuff I hit writer's block. That's quite annoying as a matter of fact.

But anyway...Thank you for the review. You're the most consistent reviewer and I'd like to specifically thank you for that!  



Author's Response:

 Yeah, you're right. As I read the whole story from the beginning the last chapter seemed to be a bit in a rush. Sorry about that... I don't know but I felt myself repeating things over and over again, that's why I decided to end this. I didn't want this to be boring, spamming the same themes repeatedly... As a non native english speaker I find it very difficult to provide cool smut scenes (vocabulary is too limited) so, all I do, is describe the giantesses, have them meet the men but when it's time for the hotter stuff I hit writer's block. That's quite annoying as a matter of fact.

But anyway...Thank you for the review. You're the most consistent reviewer and I'd like to specifically thank you for that!  

Reviewer: Reidthemouseboy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05 2022 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 8

You really know how to do Futa Giantesses so well. Another amazing story and can't wait for the next one. Honestly all I would request is maybe one more chapter of what happened to the soilders who got captured by the kids in chapter 7. Just generally curious what happened to them.



Author's Response:

 Thank you for the constructive criticism. As for the missing soldiers, the whole situation was more or less like a teaser. True, the story left this part a bit unanswered but that was intentional from my part. That's how I imagined it from the beginning. My sole focus was on the main protagonist and his endeavors. The rescue team was just a side story. I apologize if it was a turn off...but I don't think I 'll be adding new chapters in the future.

Thanks for the feedback!


Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 26 2022 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 7

Hmm, interesting chapter. I’m actually surprised Ian told to the truth to Ada. Part of me was also hoping the secret could be kept longer to Samantha could use him again in secret. Now with Ada knowing, that opportunity won’t likely happen as often. 

I find the little soldier army part kind of funny. It reminds me of the 2nd aliens movie where the most badass military people felt overconfident ready to take on anything. And now just a few little girls managed to over power them. 

Also, the last part where they wanted to take them to their mom was great. I hope she’s as kinky as Samantha or maybe more naughty. It would be awesome if the mom takes the youngest rookie solider and “teaches” him about her and their world.

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: zoidaniih Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25 2022 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

Amazing story man, keep it up! 

Reviewer: SuperSaul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2022 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hey!  I've lurked for a long time, but I HAD to make an account just so I could review this story.  I LOVE it!  Keep up the good work I can't wait to see more :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2022 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 6

Yes! I’m glad Ian decided to keep his situation with Samantha as a secret. This will allow more opportunists for her to play with him in the future! 

I also like how Samantha was suggesting stuff to Ada as if Ian wanted it. However, what Samantha was a bit different from what I thought she would pick. I guess she wanted her daughter to accept that being naughty toward Ian is great, but the whole party with the other girls seems a bit much. I was expecting Samantha to say “Ian also wants to spend more time with me and learn how to please us better”. Then Ada could see that Ian enjoyed his time with Samantha and she would allow them to be together more often. 

With the 4 new girls involved, part of me wonders if there are too many characters now. I thought the trio of Ada, Ian and Samantha was perfect. Maybe Samantha set this whole thing up so she could “save” Ian and Ada will thank her for it later. 

For the new girls, my favorite is Ashley. She’s taller, has some confidence and also seems eager to play with Ian. However, she doesn’t seem as naughty as Samantha so I will be curious when she will return for some fun. 

I love the measuring contest. It was fun and kinky. I wished Samantha would’ve shown up and just destroy everyone’s sizes with her appendage. Haha! Well, I think Ian already knows it way too well. 

Well, I can’t wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Well, it's good to hear that this story goes well received...As for the number of characters, I've always wanted to make a chapter using the multiple giantesses theme...I don't know, but something with the main protagonist being at the mercy of a bunch of huge giantesses makes him even more helpless and in need, grasping the essence of the fetish more deeply...With regard to the giantesses' personalities, while I was making Ashley I was thinking more of an introverted/modest, dedicated girl, in contrast to Bella's fiery,bratty personality. As for the twins, I was picturing Cindy like a naive silly innocent girl contrary to Charley who I was fantasizing to be a more serious and responsible sibling. All in all, I was trying to give the impression of an all around party of regular, everyday friends...except with gigantic proportions! Lol

Anyway, thanks for the feedback! 

Reviewer: Recoveringlurker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2022 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 6

I  love the humiliation in this story and in your previous one.  I will be a fan of what you write no matter what direction you decide to go.

Reviewer: Shrunkenman94 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02 2022 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 6

I hope Ian actually tells Ada the truth, great chapter

Author's Response:

We'll come to that...eventually.

Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2022 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 5

Another great find.  I normally hate futa but when size stuff is involved, I find myself far more open minded.  This story is hitting all the right buttons for me.  A gentle giantess who wants to friends with the tiny human, a naughty, dominant giantess who wants to play with him, an interesting setting with plenty of room for the imagination to come up with different scenarios.  Like your other story, I'm really looking forward to seeing more.

I kind of want Ian to speak up about what Samantha did to him but at the same time I want him to keep quiet and see her lewdly bully him some more.  Samantha clearly enjoys being the big sexy giantess to Ian but I don't think she realizes just how much he means to Ada.  It presents an opportunity for Ada to stand up for herself and Ian and hopefully get through to her mother.  Maybe Ian will tell her in secret at bedtime.

Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: October 30 2022 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 5

Hate this so much. The fic has a gentle tag and it devolved into slavery and torture stuff.

At least put the right tags if you want to go that route.



Author's Response:

Problem solved.

Reviewer: Micha7789 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 26 2022 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 5

This is a great story! Keep up the good work ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Micha7789 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2022 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 5

This is a great story! Keep up the good work ;)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2022 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 5

If I was Ian, I would stay silent of course. Don’t want Samantha to be even more cruel to him. Her torment is actually super hot, so it’s best to keep it at this level. 
Ian should keep it a secret and Samantha could use this to her advantage and use him in secret all the time. 
Would love to see Samantha hide Ian from Ada and play with him all the time.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

 Maybe hiding the secret will have a domino effect on poor Ian...The key to his future is Ada's reaction...Many things will depend on that.

Reviewer: Joker592 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2022 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 5

get him to reveal what she did. It's a bit typical for the man to hide the secret anyway in stories like these.



Author's Response:

 Agreed on that. It's the inner battle with one's fears and agonies after all...Faced with such a calamity, will Ian be able to stand his ground, defend himself and take the risk of having Samantha as an enemy? He's been given the choice...What he'll do with that is the issue. Not all men are able to stand up and face the consequences of their actions...The brave inherit the earth, they say...The real question is whether a young man is capable of doing the right thing regardless of personal profit or damage... 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2022 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 4

Wow, I think I’m in love with Samantha! She’s so naughty and dominant! 

I really enjoy her playfully tormenting Ian and how she traps him inside her. 

I hope she gets to spend even more time with Ian while Ada is away. Her lust and power for control is fun to watch. 

I also like the “escape/punishment” dynamic. Would love to see Ian try to squirm his way out, and just before he’s free, Samantha pushes him back in. 

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: zhangkui Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08 2022 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 4

I love this story and look forward to the next update

Reviewer: zhangkui Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08 2022 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 4

I love this story and look forward to the next update

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