Date: July 06 2023 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: Doing The Right Thing
Just found this story but had to say this is top-tier. You do a very good job with balancing sheer violence with cordial wholesome moments, it makes for an interesting dynamic. Also like the way you write Henry, he picks up on subtle things that happen around him, and immediately comes to the most logical or rational conclusion without saying it aloud. Rare in these types of stories to see a main character be wildly competent lol
And if I could touch upon anything else, I like the way you dripfeed Ira's backstory, didn't expect her to be the most intriguing character after her introduction. First glance you think she will just be the angry human hater, but then you find out she doesn't really eat humans, rarely sinks ships, and even had a human partner. Really curious to see her backstory
All that said, I had to make an account just to say all this cause i don't often find giantess stories that strike a good balance between fetish stuff and having an actual compelling story. Will for sure check out more of your stories 👍
Date: October 24 2022 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 1: Doing The Right Thing
Great introduction chapter. The third person use of narrative worked really well with the contents of this chapter, and a good amount of description was used too.
We also got some general characterisation for some of the main few characters that were prominent here, with Henry being somewhat kindhearted, maybe a bit ignorant, and the sea beast woman being capable of understanding actions from Henry also show her understanding of social dynamics and intentions.
Good stuff.
Date: October 18 2022 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 1: Doing The Right Thing
pls commune this its getting good
[Report This]Date: September 15 2022 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 1: Doing The Right Thing
Funny to see Aby unaware of some of the things humans are accustomed to.
Don't know if I've said it before. In case I haven't, Abyssus really feels like she embodies the jovial and curious spirit that comes with being someone so different from humans. A large contrast to her mother who, while caring a great deal for her daughter, doesn't see her most recent interest in the best of light. With Ira around Henry gots his work cut out for him. But so long as he with Abyssus then I'm sure things'll be fine.
....hopefully
Date: September 14 2022 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 1: Doing The Right Thing
You shall leave him as you left me, as you left her, marooned for all eternity, at the center of a wrecked island, buried alive...
But wrathful references aside, this is a most special chapter you've presented. The conflicting attitude between Ira (DIES*IRAE) and Abyssus is put in a clear limelight. One could only wonder what would soften Ira's attitude towards Henry, although a lot might depend on her daughter's reaction.
Wonderful imagery portrayed when Henry picked through her teeth. I was, however, expecting something more horrifying, although Lucifer's boot with his foot still inside was quite explicit.
Kind of cute that these axolotl's are unfamiliar with the concept of cooking ,content to tear through their prey raw and unprocessed. Perhaps a campfire date will woo Abyssus even more. And speaking of cute, Abyssus's adorable attributes, particularly from her excited, enthusiastic guide around the island, contrasts most deliciously with her nonchalance over the massacre that had erupted the previous chapter.
Ripe with anticipation for continuation, although I suspect some black powder might be getting in the way of that.
[Report This]Date: September 04 2022 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: Doing The Right Thing
Liking this so far, I do love me some nautical stuff.
Date: September 03 2022 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 1: Doing The Right Thing
Cute giantess axolotl gf gets my seal of approval
[Report This]Date: September 03 2022 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 1: Doing The Right Thing
Very interesting story. Nice start, and well written. Interesting to see where your story goes.
As sexy as you describe her, she still seems terrifying.
Author's Response:
Don’t worry, she is.
[Report This]Date: September 02 2022 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 1: Doing The Right Thing
Very interesting idea for a story! I like it so far :)!