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Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 05 2022 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 2: Returning the Favor

What's hotter than a female devouring and destroying an entire ship full of men?  The woman swallowing the entire ship and crew in one gulp perhaps, hmmm.  LOL

Seems Henry is going to end up on the island of Ogygia {i.e. / e.g. "The Odyssey" by Homer}. 

Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2022 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 2: Returning the Favor

Here is the carnage I was promised! And boy did you deliver on it! Abyssus is far more monstrous than I could have imagine. And her mother's even more so. Truly beasts worth fearing should you get on their bad side. 

But despite their monstrous nature it's the much smaller Abyssus who shows restraint. Even with her gore covered face she somehow shows herself to be an adorable creature. 

Top tier content!

Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2022 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 2: Returning the Favor

Dang, the mother is as overwhelming as can be! Clutching that ship in the palm of her hand, you'd have to imagine the crew were instilled with a sense of hopelessness. Heck, she's kind of like a final boss, where on the platform of the monster's hand, you have to fight smaller creatures.

The daughter beginning the carnage was as bloody as promised. You gave us nice, quick yet vivid images of men being eaten like candy bars as she goes through them.

A sea creature transporting their loved ones via mouth sounds very familiar eh? Like something something shark-girl stuff.

Look forward to all the fluff, after that absolute bloodbath. Gib me the gentle stuff nao!

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