Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2022 11:53 PM Title: Divine Chapter 1 - Who am I?

You don’t usually see these types of stories on this site, so it’s always nice to see someone else’s take on the cosmic size genre. And it was an overall delight to read. You have a great writing prose, littered with a plethora of adjectives and chock full of descriptions. I think they really capture the sense of scale this story is trying to convey. My only worry with these types of stories is that often there isn’t any end goal. But that’s a worry for later. So far, I have to say this chapter was written quite well.