Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2022 11:59 PM Title: Mortal Chapter 1 - Worlds Apart

The juxtaposition between the tones of the divine chapter and the mortal chapter were exactly as I hoped for. The sense of playfulness and fun in the earlier chapter perfectly contrasts and compliments the sense of terror and destruction in this one. Of course , using so many perspectives are a must for these kinds of things, as it were done here. But sometimes, (and I do think I’m nitpicking here.) it can feel like a compilation of random bad events when it’s just given in this order so frequently. 

Other than that, this seems like it’s heading in a good direction.