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Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 21 2023 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

Sweet! Yeah I mean I read the sequel loved it too. But would def enjoy some bonus chapters with those two characters and a similar pole scenario lol. If you got the time and inspiration ofc.

Reviewer: Iunno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2022 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

Don't know if you realized but in the first chapter you said she had brown eyes but now you say she has violet? 


Also love the story so far!



Author's Response:

Brainfart on my end, apologies!

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2022 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very nice start, and interesting as to why Liza wants them to refer to her as "Mommy" while being her tiny slaves.

Can't wait to see where this story goes.

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