Excellent start! Love the balance between Talia's horny desires and her development as a character. I think its a perfect fit for what I look for in stories on here. These types of powerful gts and interesting and relatively capable normal human are my favorite. I think Myra being unaware was a great place to start and to explore how much Talia can get away with before Myra notices. I'm sure it will be an epic moment. I'm glad Talia already seems to be warming up to her in a real way.