[Report This]Date: September 10 2023 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved this one! Hope to read more from you.
Date: February 07 2023 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is one of your stories I’ve been keeping up with the most! So excited to see another chapter. Cant wait to see she fancies her new height!
[Report This]Date: November 06 2022 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really like this so far. I love their dynamic but Jack seems like he only thinks of her like a weapon too. And who the hell is the Commonwealth lol literally everyone seems to unanimously agree they deserve death including their civilians.
Date: November 06 2022 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 5
Trent is a most interesting character, one that defied my expectations, just like he did with Jack. It's nice that the brass isn't just some out of touch old geezers malding at some super soldier, there's at least some competence at the elite levels, which will make this conflict interesting.
We've not seen much of the CommonWealth. It's unknown if this is a classic, "relatively good vs relatively evil" or just plain geopolitics. Jack apparently has a bone to pick with them, and, in my own theory, it's because he was once a citizen. It's possible that he, or someone close to him, ran afoul of their own elite class and paid the price. Maybe they killed his fiance, and thus, his desire to use Emma is a form of ironic revenge.
It also appears Jack is well aware of Emma's designs for him, and Trent is ever so quick to pick up on the signals. Trent does appear to have a level of scheming that Jack should watch out for.
Not the most "interesting" chapter, but certainly, the most interesting, in terms of lore. I really like how exposition was handled, it was integrated well and smoothly into the writing. Obviously, building up Emma's apparent invulnerability was a fun scene. This is one of those stories that I'm refreshing gtsworld main page for.
[Report This]Date: November 06 2022 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really enjoying the story so far got a question is he intentionally trying to piss her off? And I kind of hope that maybe if she's really really happy that will cause her to grow too so he starts being nice to her it also be interesting too if he gets to command more girls who are super soldiers also I noticed that he really gets off on power which is something I like too many stories usually that the guy is really apprehensive and shy around the girl
[Report This]Date: November 06 2022 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 5
Colonel Trent makes me think of Heidegger from FF7 from the way you described him. An excellent story so far I especially like the sweat rubbing chapter with the major but she might be too big and strong for that now. I also really like your elf and mage apprentice story a lot.
[Report This]Date: October 30 2022 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely amazing so far. Really hope you continue.
[Report This]Date: October 26 2022 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 3
“You’re my little stress ball,” she whispered, hardly able to contain her excitement, “my dirty sweat rag, my toy, whatever I want. That's your duty as my assistant, not your fucking paperwork. How does that sound, assistant?”
That alone should net this story six stars, but I only have five to give. Emma is a whirling hurricane of emotion, and Jack is doing everything he can to stir that storm.It appears intense emotion also causes her to grow. She appeared to be one hundred feet at the start, I'm wondering how tall she is now. This is important, because it looks like Jack's job, just got twice as hard.
[Report This]Date: October 26 2022 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
A hot ass giantess soldier that nonchalantly throws an armored tank over her shoulder only for it to land a few miles / mountains away; after completely obliterating an entire army on her own. How f_cking HOT!
Emma is not only the ultimate soldier, she is the ultimate SEXIEST soldier.
Can't wait to read about her arrangement with Jack. Especially since Jack seems more focused on Emma's almighty strength and cost analysis rather than her mere physical superiority over individual men and entire armies.
Great story, can't wait to read more; especially of Emma's ability to annihilate armies with impunity.
[Report This]Date: October 25 2022 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
Very promising start
[Report This]Date: October 25 2022 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Who's this dive hoser that inspired this? Sounds like a wierdo.
Already, in just 5,000 words, you've built up yet another juggernaut to add to your collection. The reader can already grasp the wrought and ruin this titaness renders upon modern military platforms. It serves the story to see men who were once commanders of these potent weapons, now see their days of martial supremacy numbered.
Of course, ol' Jack is a gem here. He appears to be one of cool mind, and knows his priorities, but when we get further along in the chapter, his eyes start to wander, and that's where the descriptions of Emma start to heat up, implying that he has more than military applicability on his mind.
Look forward to the continuation.