Reviews For Life Under Layla
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Reviewer: VelvetSK Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04 2022 12:59 AM Title: Dirty Laundry

You have a good sense of details, but as of writing this review this chapter is in serious need of paragraphing. Try to limit your paragraphs to the same person, place, time, or topic.

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