Date: November 18 2022 7:34 PM Title: Prologue: High School
Great chapter. I am really enjoying this story as much as the other ones. Your a great writer. Is there any chance maybe a for a crossover between this story and bring in Allyson from your other one and make her a Valkyrie? Since she has shrinking powers? that would be fun to do. But I am loving this wanting to see where it goes.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! Allison's world and this one aren't the same, anyone who has read enough of my stories has figured out that I'm pretty shameless about reusing concepts, and in my defense I'll say that Stephen King sold 3 evil car stories that I can recall lol. Allison might be considered a "prototype" of the Valkyrie idea, she's definitely not amazonian, and her shrinking powers are way beyond anything even Melinda could do, I suppose if you wanted to try to reconcile the differences in worlds you could say that Allison (and Sadie by plot) were early adopters of the Valkyrie genes, and after The Lab got busted Melinda's husband used their research to develop the Valkyrie gene therapy. I'm not 100% sure it's a good idea for a crossover though, I'm trying to go a bit more serious than usual with this one and Neighbor Girl is still pretty lighthearted, even with Allison's darker impulses.
Date: November 18 2022 6:02 AM Title: Prologue: High School
Really enjoying the story so far, kind of a quick turnaround with Carmen but it works rather well.
Also typo.
“We beat her before,” Carmen said quietly, “we’re going to do it again.”
Author's Response:
Typo fixed
Anyway speaking from personal experience a lot of times we have memories from childhood or early adulthood that are just sort of "stored" and we don't really properly analyze them until years later and then we realize how messed up some of them were. That's kind of what I was going for with Carmen, like it's not so much that she forgot how she treated Samantha and Kyle as it is that she's never really stepped back and pondered those memories through an adult's eyes. Suddenly the narrative of her "revenge" no longer makes sense, as they said, she realizes she was and has been the asshole.
[Report This]Date: November 15 2022 7:09 AM Title: Prologue: High School
I just finished the most recent chapter and once again Greenanon has hit it out of the park! Their character writing has always been their strong suit and I really enjoy this faux tsundere archetype that they have going on with Carmen, and Sammy and Kyle are also a great way to round out the main cast. I usually skip prologue chapters but this time I had to read it, and I really like how you can tell that these characters have matured and changed from high school while still feeling like they're still the same, it's a difficult task and Greenanon easily completes it. I'm excited to see where this series goes, and more excited to see where the story, and fetish content (I believe this is their first time attempting multisize if that's what they're hinting at with chapter 6 and I'm Incredibly excited for that), twists and turns like most of their stories do!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I debated the prologue chapter vs using flashbacks, but I felt like a somewhat complete history between the three characters was needed to understand some plot points.
Also yes we will have some good multisize action throughout this story! It's not my first time with it, there was some in the later Conquest of Earth plotlines.
[Report This]Date: November 11 2022 4:41 AM Title: Prologue: High School
Just got to get this off my own chest, but I really enjoyed all of your stories even the ones left unfinished they got a certain taste to them that just pulled you in not just for the sexual scenes but also for characters involved in the stories, as for these three I have a feeling that at the end of it all it going to be a three way relationship or FF/m aka two Mrs.westwoods, also realize that Carmen make seven figures as a valkyrie that like one to ten million dollars a year so these three are millionaires already in there twenties, I wish I was one of them at that point.
Author's Response:
I don't think I gave an exact sum that Carmen makes yearly as a Valkyrie but you can imagine it's close to what a specialist doctor makes, so probably high six figures and her net worth is a million or more. Kyle and Samantha are that next level of rich from being successful App developers, obviously we'd all like to be them lol.
[Report This]Date: November 08 2022 4:42 PM Title: Prologue: High School
This story is already so compelling!!! Your characters and plots are always so second to none. Your sense of tension, pacing and story structure is so good I’m always addictively pulled along with the story.
Author's Response:
Thanks, this one is like I've said an attempt at a darker story, so this one will probably have more tension than a lot of my other ones, but with an ending I hope makes it all worth it.
[Report This]Date: November 08 2022 1:36 AM Title: Prologue: High School
Great start! I love your writing, you're definitely one of the size-authors who "gets it" in all the same ways that appeal to me about the fetish.
I'm excited to see you venturing into
something a little different, though I do hope you also continue your
normal style as well! I loved how you set up in the first chapter
Carmen needing the serum as a shoe in for her realizing what was
happening in chapter 3! Great "show don't tell"!
Not asking for spoilers but hopefully not all the R rated things in this story are unpleasant;).
Author's Response:
I will probably return to my more comfortable goofy adventure type stories after this one, but I've been wanting to branch out a bit. Oh and yes there will be more enjoyable X-rated scenes for our protags in the story.
[Report This]Date: November 07 2022 12:07 AM Title: Prologue: High School
I mean, I was pretty much hooked on this story from the short summary alone. A wonderful concept that I’m very excited to see play out. And after the first two chapters, I’m very eager for more. Terrific start, can’t wait for what’s next
Author's Response:
Thanks, I thought the prologue and the first chapter would be good to upload together.
[Report This]Date: November 07 2022 12:04 AM Title: Prologue: High School
Hi,
it seems I am the first one to leave a review for this story; I definitely have not expected it to be the case, considering how prolific and popular author you have become in such a short time...
The more serious tone of this one is immediately noticable. I have read almost all of your previous works (one exception, if I recall) and a deviation from the light-hearted and goofy installments is actually quite welcome. Do not get me wrong, they are both great and gratly entertaining stories in their own way (and deserve probably 10/10 rating by the standards of this site), but some themes became a bit repetitive, so a change is quite refreshing. Plot-wise it also opens new possibilities, where the readers are presented with difficult and emotional real life problems the protagonists will have to face with more mature mindsets. Anyway, I think you are off to a very solid start and I can only encourage you to treat the further chapters with care as the setting is very promising.
C
Author's Response: I'm glad the more serious tone is sticking, this is going to be a fairly dark one in that everyone here has a lot of stuff they need to work through. I'm trying to branch out a bit, so we'll see how I do with this kind of thing, I'm pretty excited so far!