[Report This]Date: November 17 2022 2:27 AM Title: Rose Tinted
Wow! I really like the characterisation of Carmine. There is something amazing about shrunken couple stories. Your style of writing really works with this type of story.
Author's Response:
Thanks I have wanted to do a shrunken couple story for some time now.
[Report This]Date: November 16 2022 9:39 PM Title: Rose Tinted
Another amazing chapter! Carmen is such a fun character. Selfish and strong, but somewhere deep down she wants to be good natured. I’m my mind, I know logically that Kyle and Sam have a right to resent her for bullying them growing up, but it’s impossible not to feel for Carmen’s loneliness.
Plus, in-shoe entrapment is just plain good old fashioned fun. And being artificially horny with your spouse while trapped inside the sweaty shoe of your former bully? *Chef’s Kiss*
Great work as always! Plus I also went through your profile and read your dnd style fantasy shrinking story. Loved it!
Author's Response: It's been a long road for the trio and they've got more ahead, Carmen does want to be good but she's also... well she's Carmen, it gets in the way. And yeah in shoe entrapment is always fun, glad you liked Champion of the Goddess, a fairly silly story but one I enjoyed writing.
[Report This]Date: November 16 2022 6:50 AM Title: Rose Tinted
Oh my God I’m so emotionally invested in this story. Carmen is one of your best written characters yet and I love how the much the plot depends on her soul prevailing or not. I think this might be your best one since abduction.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I really wanted to hit some harder emotional notes with this one, most of my stories are fairly lighthearted affairs and I wanted to try one with a little more seriousness to it. Carmen's internal struggle will ultimately be doom or salvation for all three of our protagonists, I'm glad you're enjoying her so far!