Date: November 20 2022 8:46 PM Title: Complications
Love this chapter for two main reasons. First, I was feeling so bad for Carmen. It’s not like she’s blameless, but she is a perfectly likeable protagonist and it’s tough to see someone grappling with those sort of introspective emotions, despite how heathy it is. So obviously I don’t expect them to all be best friends now, but it seems like a good bit of healing was done in that bedroom.
Second, when Carmen offers a spot in the front of her panties and a spot in the back, having Sammy immediately claim the front is a spectacular moment. Kyle holds try to his nature and begins to complain, but Sammy is along for the ride and inadvertently earns her husband a quick trip to Carmen’s ass. A small moment, but one of my favorites!
Excellent job!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad she's a likeable main character, obviously the three are all on better terms now, even if things aren't 100% where they could be. Also yeah Sammy realized right away that they're on the ride lol, a nicer Carmen is still Carmen and if she says one person's going in the front and one in the back you call your spot.
Date: November 20 2022 6:18 AM Title: Complications
I love this chapter. I was thinking of some ideas that you can do? Maybe a flashback chapter of what she use to do to Kyle and Samantha in high school. Or maybe a Alternative chapter of what it would be like if Carmen had them shrunk in high school and what she would do to them? Always enjoy your chapters. It was worth the wait.
Author's Response:
I'll see what I can do, a flashback might work for something or a dream sequence or something along those lines, generally you can assume that any act of bullying possible Carmen did it.
[Report This]Date: November 19 2022 9:26 PM Title: Complications
Really enjoying this one so far. It’s interesting seeing this strange relationship between the three of them develop. I’m curious to see how the bad guys plan is gonna turn out. I do hope we might get to see Kyle and Sammy at Carmen’s feet sometime. Maybe they even get freaky on them too because of the pheromones. Anyways, can’t wait for more!
Author's Response:
Don't worry Kyle and Sammy will have plenty of run ins with Carmen's feet, shoes, and the rest of her body
Date: November 19 2022 8:38 PM Title: Complications
"He fingers abandoned him"
Author's Response:
Fixed