[Report This]Date: January 09 2023 3:57 AM Title: Trouble Wears Black
More excellent world building in this chapter!
As I touched on in my previous review, the Amazon/female-male role reversal trope doesn’t do it for me. I’m not into tomboys/masculine women IRL, and I typically prefer my giantesses far bigger. On top of that, I’m not usually into fantasy/sci-fi settings for size stuff. TLDR: this story is the polar opposite of what I’m normally into.
However, the way you’ve set things up here has me hooked; can’t explain why, but whatever you’re doing, keep it up!
Interested to see more of how men born/raised in the queendom live, as we’ve only gotten a close look at outsiders so far.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it even if it's not your usual thing, there's a lot going on in this particular tale, the cowboy angle, the role reversal, the dinosaurs, maybe it just all clicks for you in a way the stuff usually doesn't on its own? Anyways thanks for reading, we will see lots more of how life in the Queendom is for various groups.
[Report This]Date: January 09 2023 1:54 AM Title: Trouble Wears Black
The ribbon gimmick is touch of genius. Something tells me the auroch’s won't be the only naked beast sweating sweating under the sun later.
Tom is awesome too. He's like Jaskier from the Witcher show on Netflix, only somehow even greater.
Great work, green. Loved this chapter
Author's Response:
Yes the compliance ribbon is a fun punishment isn't it? Tom has been playing the game and really leaning into the amazon culture you might say, so he makes a good rival for Dirk.
[Report This]Date: January 09 2023 12:57 AM Title: Trouble Wears Black
And here I was hoping he'd choose Lady Griselda...
Still, phenomenal entries, can't wait for more snu snu and intrigue.
Author's Response:
Yeah I can't say I wouldn't be tempted myself lol, but Dirk went with the person he knew best in the room.