Reviewer: DcZ Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2023 11:32 PM Title: Prologue

Im glad I can give ideas!

I recomend even just googling and looking through Pinterest (some throwaway account should work) for the kinds of shoes/boots/booties you/Amiée would want to use. The algorithms should help the rest.

Plus, if Amiée doesn’t know how to walk in heals well enough yet, or such, there are Reddit snd forum posts on how to train up, good for long time wearing of heels to have tinies in. 

And the reason I said train up for hiking, is that hiking does need some training for better fitness and stamina. And, braking in the shoes. So again even before some serious hiking/vacation, thats some rank boots for your and her after the months of it. Besides also wearing the heels on exercise machines, or otherwise intense exercising, and could use heeled sneakers. Thos exist. Not advised IRL but proper training seems to be possible for them. 

And Us readers will have it see if Amiée can shrink non living things or how far. Crushing cars are a popular one, going to a scrapyard for cars no one cares about, and again wedges allow crushing with the whole footprint. 

Or inserting and crushing a whole bus or train car full of people for her direct pleasure. 

Is shrinking and aria/space possible, that will have to be seen. 

We will have to find out if shes tried directly eating people, she shrink and kills them regularly enough. And there always mixing them with normal food. Especially depending on how small she can make them. 

And if she does get board, she can go online and ask enthusiasts like us for more ideas and there practicalities, theres no real shortage. 

So I hope theses help some more, and can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Always love to hear other people's ideas, so of course you can, mate!

Oh, I wouldn't worry about that. Aimée's pretty used to walking on tinies in almost any type of shoe, especially heels. Plus, she's got getting hot and sweaty down to an art form as well. I mean, she plays football/soccer for a reason!

As for the extent of her powers, suppose we'll have to dive into more of that as the story progresses. Though she's not really one for killing the people she targets, after all, that'd be a very real crime she could be viably charged with. Whereas just shrinking and torturing people for a couple nights, at least with the way she does it, isn't really something she worries about biting her in the ass. Especially not when she can just shrink people for even longer if they want to try and hassle her lol.

Thanks man, and hope you like the newest chapter!

Reviewer: DcZ Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2023 1:02 AM Title: Prologue

Looks great!

Can’t wait for the FF F/f and FF/f parts!

And since shoes seems to be on the table from the tags, recommend wedges for maximum underfoot area and easier to walk in for a high heel. Plus there always having a compartment in them for stories shrunken people if wanted. 

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

It might be a little while before any FF/f content, however, if all goes to plan there should be a bit of F/f in the next chapter, so keep an eye out!

Definitely some good ideas there, so I'll have to make a note of that. Not sure how much this story will get into the idea of heavily customised shoes used to imprison or contain shrunken people like in a wedge or boot heel, but you never know I suppose...